Nihilistic Love Poem

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Are we like candles
flames are our dreams
like the sound of a lit match
dipped in water
perhaps that is love...

Diseased with love
disconsolate with shades of bile
the dream of death in daylight
shoveling to survive
I said, "I love you"
you said, "I love you too"
it was nausea
then we wandered into different rooms..

You were the pale blue sky
milking the moonless night
I was the crow virus
fettered by rain...

Pure genetic providence
intellectual procedure
amalgamation of predisposed chromosomes
thrown into existence
with the ambiguity of Kierkegaard...

Some call it happily ever after...
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Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
Brought to you tonight by red wine and delta 9 THC...
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SnowCoveredMuse
Spart~

"milking the moonless night
I was the crow virus
fettered by rain..."

Nevermind I can't pick
a favorite stanza,
I had to re-read it twice
I love it so much.

impassioned read, Bravo!

~SAS~
thumbs up heart wings
Spartacus2012
Thank you Muse for visiting this one tonight!

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soulgoddess
daydream joy something different about this poem.... enjoyed reading it bouquet
Poetnumber1
Loved the poem Ken and the smoking monkey. I hope he knows smoking is not good for his health. It was a pleasure to read buddy. cheers
Spartacus2012
Thank you Angeline, I suppose this was a dark existential write..

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Spartacus2012
Thanks for stopping by poet buddy..By the way, the monkey moved to Colorado..lol

Kentyping
Mizzy4
Deep, honest poem Ken,
I enjoyed it.........Mick.

cheers
Spartacus2012
Thank you Mick..Glad you liked this one my friend..

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123whisper
It was a pleasure to read and monkey is very funnylaugh Thank you for sharing teddybear
Spartacus2012
Thank you Whisper! Yeah, that monkey is a riot..lol


Kenthanks
lindsyjonesonline today!
Yes my friend...Kierkegaard is one of most famous philosopher much akin to Ayn Rand,. Critic to the idealist existence of religious ambiguities.

In fact influenced and reinforced my belief based on all the principles of reality and not abstract existence...

And yes, happily ever after my dearest brother is but an illusion...Non existent...as we don't belong to where we have no control...we exist and that is it. Enjoy or not take it as it comes...
Spartacus2012
Hi sister Phyllis,

Existentialism is my favorite philosophy and approach towards a psychology of being..Gestalt is fascinating as well, the "meaningful whole." Thanks for visiting today!

Kenflower
darkhorse555
oh like your style on this one ken excellent piece of writing dear friendangel grin
Spartacus2012
Thank you Liam for dropping by..

Kensuper
candykid
Super poem Ken....and the "inspiration"......laugh
It seems these corner primates appreciate fine tobacco.....thumbs up cheers
Spartacus2012
Thank you Christian, good to know I'm among my own kind..lol

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