a breathless rose

walking in
silently opening
then entering whispering
golden glee
blowing steam
silver echos enchants
sweetest deep ocean
music waves whistle
haunting one dream
under a spell

a magic
tune plays
on the sweetest pipes
flashing in
a corridor
of light
dancing away darkness


going bananas love
slipping into space
soul approach
floating into
this costume
tarzan appears
in paradise jungle
not shaven
on an elephants back

beating hands
upon his chest
howling echos
over heather
clad mountains
from tree to tree
catching one breath
smiling face
rose clawing inside
house of beauty

feelings touch
each a thorn
in softly coated
satin velvet pleasure
sweet kissing emotions
puckering lips
desire gently caressing
inside one's heart
standing tall
so beautiful mouthwatering
the structure image
of your stem

regal among'st flowers
sitting on
the highest seat
in full splendor
crowning standing blossoms
petals dazzling beautifully

rose confetti perfumes
heavenly scent
floating upon air
buttery scenting
aroma sweetly fluttering
on fresh petals
that you breathe
out a lady
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2014

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Comments (24)

candykid
A lovely poem Liam. .....thumbs up
diana_1
an element of the primitive in this romance.... beautiful simmering energy... well done Liam, fantasticcheering
soulgoddess
heart1 daydream rose

A romantic masterpiece from you
Always enjoyed reading it
Words would fly off this screen
and transform into beautiful butterflies
transcending ...


danceline
Girlygirl196349
Beautiful Liam.i hope all is well with you wave hug cheering angel
Mizzy4
Passionate romantic piece Liam,
Nice work,
Mick.

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darkhorse555
thank you ever so much christian beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciatedangel grin
Spartacus2012
Awesome write dear friend..

Kencheers
darkhorse555
smiling diana wonderful comment crazy frog is the mad side of tarzan thank you kindly dear friend deeply appreciatedangel wine
Poetnumber1
Lovely imagery you paint here Liam. Enjoyed the read.
darkhorse555
angeline dazzling a humbling beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated angel hug grin
darkhorse555
thank you laura for the beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciatedangel wine
rapturecapture
Hi Liam

You have surpassed yourself in this sublime write!...

Loved reading!

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxhug angel wave
darkhorse555
thank you so kindly mick for the amazing comment heartfelt appreciated dear friendangel grin
darkhorse555
thank you you kindly ken truly beautiful comment appreciated deeply dear friendangel grin
darkhorse555
mm thank you for the ever so beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friendangel grin
Joseph1112
Hey brother Liam, another outstanding poem u have written friend, fully enjoyed reading this, my favourite line was, "regal amongst flowers sitting on the highest seat in full splendor crowning standing blossoms petals dazzling beautifully " fantastic imagery! Be blessed dear friend, J handshake
Bajanshay
Liam,
lovely poem! Beautiful imagery!
darkhorse555
thank you so much martina wonderful comment dear friend appreciated deeplyangel grin
123whisper
Very beautiful Liamthumbs up Prince of romance;I love itteddybear
darkhorse555
thank you so much joseph heartfelt beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciatedangel grin
darkhorse555
thank you bajan wonerful comment dear friend deeply appreciatedangel grin
lindsyjonesonline today!
rose confetti perfumes
heavenly scent
floating upon air
buttery scenting
aroma sweetly fluttering
on fresh petals
that you breathe
out a lady


Liam my dearest loved brother of mine..

Again and again..just oozing with so much sentiments..just lovely,...
darkhorse555
ha ha thea i wish wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciatedangel grin
darkhorse555
phyliss dear friend thank you so kindly wonderful comment heartfelt appreciatedangel grin
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