Conflict

My adversary
says he is my friend,
But he constantly strives
my will to bend,
Then when he breaks me
he has no respect,
I look in his eyes
can no mercy detect,

With pitiless heart
he crushes my spirit,
His nagging voice bites
so hard that I fear it,
Ashamed of my weakness
and being so meek,
Embarrassed to tears
I endeavor to seek,

Escape in denial
a powerful tool,
I still feel the anguish
I've been such a fool,
I shall continue to
play the sad role,
A poet does her duty
and loses her soul.

~SAS~
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Posted: Jul 2014
About this poem:
Okay, Im jumping out of my comfort zone and trying to rhyme, I think its cheesy but this is all I have. LOL

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Comments (7)

Mizzy4
Not one bit cheesy !
and it didn't force you
to lose any of the content.
Good poem........SAS

Regards Mick.

bouquet comfort
Poetnumber1
Not at all cheesy Sas. I would encourage you to venture more into rhymes. I thought it flowed nicely and your rhyming was not forced at all. Nice job. Wishing you a great day. hug
rapturecapture
Hi Snow

I think you have a wonderful gift...Wonderful poem...Amazing is a word I would say after reading!!

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxhug teddybear bouquet
SnowCoveredMuse
Thanks Mick,
Glad it still made
sense, I usually butcher
those when I try.

~SAS~heart wings
SnowCoveredMuse
Poet,

Thank you so much
You are a dear friend!

Enjoy your day as well,
~SAS~hug heart wings
SnowCoveredMuse
Martina,

Thank you, I am in awe of the talent
abounding here!
~SAS~hug
Joseph1112
Hi SAS it was a great read! Thanks for the share, Japplause bouquet
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