Do not leave without a comment

Do not write a poem,
when silent speak in silence.

Do not feed the demons,
biscuits and watermelons.

Do not say to sitting ducks,
that they're fierce dragons.

Do not give lame excuses,
to play with trolls and maidens.

Do not kiss and tell,
Venus you want more.

Do not speak in riddles,
when fools are in the middle.

Do not break q promise,
to bring joy and smiles to all.

Do not leave without q comment,
or I'll call mum to shoot you!
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 2015

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Comments (21)

rusticbink
Cute, quirky and peculiar poem!
Macduff5
Hi Morgan,

I like this one...a little quirky but clever. cheers
Poetnumber1
Its nice to see you once more Danish. Had to stop by..always. M.M : )
Nuwahri61
Hey Morgen ......good to see you still have it mate .......Regards Nugrin
morgen90210
My humble thanks rusticbink
morgen90210
Thanks for your comment leony
morgen90210
Thanks Jimee matey
morgen90210
Thank you Macduff5
morgen90210
Thanks for the drop by Poetno.1
morgen90210
Hey Nu ..Thanks buddy
madtat29
this is excellent...great sir. Eff anyone who says less...
morgen90210
Thank you madtat
cherryreggae
You have a flare for the unusual I like this poem morgen....one lovehug
SCatlyn
Since it's 6a.m. here, and I still haven't had a chance to get to sleep, I really feel like I'm that part near the middle(you know, the part right after the word 'riddles').

But it really made me laugh, and I'll eventually figure it out, too. Plus with the title...I thought I'd best do so(leave a comment laugh )

Cat
cats meow
Happygolucky4u
Please no kind sir do not call your mum wow
Here is your comment very happy
Very intriguing this poem of yours rose
rarecard
different but cool
SCatlyn
I got it!!

Actually, it was the first 2 lines my meandering brain wasn't getting.
Very sage,wise advice-I've seen these things you write of-some of these actions seem to go through a trend where everyone jumps on the bandwagon thinking it's a good thing, when in reality it's very unwise, sometimes downright harmful. That being said, I'm sure it's never been stated this way before!

'Do not feed the demons,
biscuits and watermelons.

Do not say to sitting ducks,
that they're fierce dragons.'


Just love it!!!

Catflex (not really- I'm not fierce..I'm just a little cats meow lol)
morgen90210
I hear you clearly Cat... Thanks teddybear
morgen90210
Glad you like it Cherry Bunny .. teddybear
morgen90210
My humble thanks Happygolucky4u teddybear
morgen90210
Thanks rarecard handshake
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