A special Candykid tribute
53 times his poetry magic works,
In the hands of time two stars fallen,
He is living in eternal darkness,
Suspended around the dark matter.
He's incomplete and can't compete,
A ghostwriter trapped inside his prison,
His words filled with angst and passion,
Blind sided in order to dim lights.
Chasing immortality throughout his life,
Suffering beyond the garden of insanity,
His essence caught by a supernatural being,
From a ghostly aura of an invisible thing.
It transform into a sparkling black marble,
And again into his supreme Queen,
His adoration is simply indescribable,
Witnessed by the hundreds and millions .
And in the halls of the black nights,
His spirit weaken and soul stricken,
Possession from the scent of Fear,
Presence denied in the space of time.
But nothing compares from the history of earth,
Can stop the power of his neverending love,
Alas nothing is quite as it seems,
From the shadows dancing from within.
In the midst of the gigantic Candy Horse constellation,
God is not invisible because I see him clearly in candy's Christian face!
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Posted: Aug 2017
About this poem:
A special tribute and dedication to a specific and special friend and motivational poet who never holds back any punches ...except for me
Comments (22)
Nice tribute.
Kathy
Glad to be back since they change the format again ...still having problems posting my poems
now I don't know how to add pics and change colors ...I miss the old format was mobile friendly.
I am back again .
thanks you and do drop in ....
Thank you Christian and I wrote earlier a long response but this site wipe all of it clean !!!
I borrowed your words and with my tiny gift some kind of magic came forth and this was my best poem ever . You are like a lighthouse I look upon when I come here . you gave your honest and best opinion to some where close to 34,000 poems ... less I think
Thank you for your insights and wisdom .
It was my humblest honour to compose this truly inspiring and magical poem .
That's the power of the Poetry Corner .
The level of investigations that you have delved into my writings that has enabled you to write such specific details into this is truly astounding. You have artistically woven poem titles and content of mine that have resulted in a very fine piece of poetry
I borrowed some of his works in words from his titles and hidden gems within the poems .
A fan of his can point out which of these treasures are within this poem .
53 times his poetry magic works,
what is means was He compose 53 poems .
In the midst of the gigantic Candy Horse constellation,
A poem that both Liam (dark horse) and Christian compose together .
It was worth every min working on this .
For others curious enough to find out ..you have only to check his works to find out ....ha ha ha
How are you ...heard its bad over there
Stay safe under Jesus wings ...
Great tribute to
candy kid
AKA
Candykid2
You are a superb poet!!!!!!!!!!
Rachael_0622
Very very very proud of you
Wish i could shake your
Hand much respect for you
God Bless
Rachael_062
You are a true Christian
A peacemaker
Not a warrior
w class grace
My respect
Rachael_0622