by socrates44San Fernando, Trinidad and Tobago
Jan 2015 1,223 Views 11 comments
Children Of The Universe
With my inner spirit I can converse
With the trees and stars of the universe
The conversation draws us very close
In a message of our unity
All of us are children of the same source
That's the ultimate universal force
And we all follow a similar course
In fulfilment of our destiny
With the trees and stars of the universe
The conversation draws us very close
In a message of our unity
All of us are children of the same source
That's the ultimate universal force
And we all follow a similar course
In fulfilment of our destiny
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2015
About this poem:
"You are a child of the universe, no less than the trees and the stars..."- The Desiderata
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Comments (11)
and whether or not it is clear to you
the world is unfolding as it should......." {Desiderata]
Hi Socrates ....Thanks for sharing your thoughts mate ........All the best for 2015....Regards Nu
Thanks for your comment.
Have a nice day!
Thanks for your comment.
With regard to the style, it is a Rhupunt, a welsh form of poetry with a rhyme scheme,
aaab, cccb, dddb, etc.
Thanks for your comment.
This piece is based on the message of the "Desiderata", which Nu has mentioned in his comment.
Have a wonderful day!
How are you?
Hey, those lines sound like a little poem (Just Kidding)
Thanks for your comment including the quote from the Desiderata.
Hope you have a very joyful and productive 2015!
Have a great day!
With the trees and stars of the universe
Lovely poem that reflects your love and connection to nature and the creator
Hope you are well