Raw

I go for the bottle to steady my nerves

The day has not yet begun

Last night was all laughs and fun

He leaves with a quick goodbye who is this guy

My heart is low I take a gulp of sweet surrender then another and another

It dosnt take my rawness away but exposes me and hits me hard

Like the bottle I smash to the ground

In a thousand fragments.




Peach.
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Posted: Aug 2014
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Comments (7)

cafetwo2010
Interesting reflections dear. You've been writing some
nice poems here. Welcome!
Cafeteddybear
peachmelba
Thankyou cafe .handshake ..wine Ta for reading it.
darkhorse555
deep touching beautifully drawn piece excellent writeangel
peachmelba
Ah thankyou kindly that means alot.wave
peachmelba
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This poem is fictional the character in it has been made up.....wine
peachmelba
When one asks for help and realises they cannot do it alone they have made the biggest step they can take this holds true with alot of things in life that we are no longer able to controll.
WILDANDREADY
SO GLAD ITS FICTIONAL! I WAS GETTING JEALOUS!kiss heart beating dancing TRAVIS
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