Not really that sad when you think about it The dance can be nice even if you don't leave the shore. Sometimes you just are not meant to sail away into the moon of madness. Just thought I would throw another twist to it out there
Your wording in this is really awesome. Don't know why but this poem made me think of this song.
peachmelbaOPwexford, Wexford IrelandMay 20, 2015
Ah happygolucky thankyou for dropping by,
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Don't think the couple even got to the beach ,
It was in their mind alright ,
Still I suppose that's something,
Sadness and happiness in the moment ,
Maybe they be a sequel
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Thankyou for the music DVD I'm going to look and listen to it now,
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Different from my other writes in style ,
No matter there all freestyle ,lol,
I never intentionally mean to mention the sea ,
Maybe it's because I live on the coast
Nothing relaxes me more than walking along the quay of my town ,
Or swimming ,
I like this one but its a little sad,
Yes do you know the tears were falling down my cheeks too,
I'm sorry it's sad ,
There might be a sequel ,
I could make it they leave shore ,
I don't know tho ,
I don't think they even danced the tango or got to the beach ,
They wanted to,
.:
Elle.
Not everything in life is bad ,
Too feel pain the heart will gain
In feeling what it's like to be alive ,
Spirit wild and set free,
One must know better if the other not,
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Your wording in this is really awesome.
Don't know why but this poem made me think of this song.
,
Don't think the couple even got to the beach ,
It was in their mind alright ,
Still I suppose that's something,
Sadness and happiness in the moment ,
Maybe they be a sequel
,
Thankyou for the music DVD I'm going to look and listen to it now,
,
Perfect for my poem,
Ah thankyou,
cool poem, peach
nice one