Dancing tango.

Under the moon of madness we dancing tango,
,
Chilling on the peer drinking beer

Drunk on the crest of a wave my dancing heart,

Your eyes smiling my reflection I was lost in them from the start,

Your sea of passion ,wild and free
,
Your just like me,

It wasn't meant to be,

We were dancing tango under the moon of madness,

Reflecting its sadness

On two soul mates

Who dared to dance ,

They never left the shore ,



By Peach,
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Posted: May 2015
About this poem:
The tango is a meteohor ,

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peachmelba
I tried to make this sound poetic


Different from my other writes in style ,

No matter there all freestyle ,lol,


I never intentionally mean to mention the sea ,

Maybe it's because I live on the coast

Nothing relaxes me more than walking along the quay of my town ,

Or swimming ,

I like this one but its a little sad,

crying
twazzle70
How terribly unfortunate they never left the shore...blues blues A sad story indeed,,but a pleasurable read nonetheless i think. crying wine
peachmelba
Ah thankyou very much,


Yes do you know the tears were falling down my cheeks too,


I'm sorry it's sad ,


There might be a sequel ,


I could make it they leave shore ,


I don't know tho ,


I don't think they even danced the tango or got to the beach ,

They wanted to,


wine .:
Bludylasky
Aww, this made me sad.
Elle.
peachmelba
Elle and. Trazzle don't be sad,


Not everything in life is bad ,


Too feel pain the heart will gain

In feeling what it's like to be alive ,


Spirit wild and set free,


One must know better if the other not,

teddybear
twazzle70
Fine advice Missmelba.angel2 bouquet
twazzle70
Fine advice Missmelba.angel2 bouquet
twazzle70
I was so confident in youre fine advice that i somehow felt the need to repeat myself,i think..wine
peachmelba
Ha I don't always heed my own sensible advice,


teddybear .


hug wine
Happygolucky4u
Not really that sad when you think about it professor The dance can be nice even if you don't leave the shore. Sometimes you just are not meant to sail away into the moon of madness. Just thought I would throw another twist to it out there laugh

Your wording in this is really awesome. wave
Don't know why but this poem made me think of this song.


peachmelba
Ah happygolucky thankyou for dropping by,

wine ,


Don't think the couple even got to the beach laugh ,

It was in their mind alright ,

Still I suppose that's something,

Sadness and happiness in the moment ,

Maybe they be a sequel

laugh ,

Thankyou for the music DVD I'm going to look and listen to it now,


teddybear ,dancing
peachmelba
Ah that video song is cool ,


Perfect for my poem,


Ah thankyou,


hug
trust63
wow peachmelba this is such a cool poem i love your poetry style too im impressed wine
darkhorse555
deep touching beautiful pen dear friend wishing you a lovely week angel wine
johnjjm
quack quack im back . is very nice
beautifulyou
i agree with trust
cool poem, peach
nice one cheers
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