Oh dismal mourning... I open my weary eyes once again My life has been left hollow and ashes have filled the gorge of my within Last night I hoped and wished I'd die in my sleep but no catharsis was granted to me Will this pain ever pass? The enchanting perfume of winter and the bleak, cold breath of her still haunts me... Oportet ubique pulchritudinem evanescere
So half of me rode to the mountains and the other half soared high in the winds to a place where the angels had fallen, the soil gagged and choked on their wings My soul was the pale skyline that she stretched across the horizon Two years had brought the fire that she paints upon my loathsome canvas
She is the dark one... As a bird I watched her from my cold tower in the heavens and when she fell from the northplace, I flew down and embraced her I took her where the snow falls forever, she showed me the haunted woods We gathered together in the oaken palace, free from both death and life The fire blazed in her eyes one day and she tore the soul from my chest With a bleeding heart, I flew back to my cold tower to never escape and lie in a pool of death forever
I saw the nightfall... It called to me like a river of shadows It sang to me with the cries of a thousand ravens that blackened the sky as they took flight and sank the Sol I shall never trust the sun again, Eridanis Nadir
I ran away far into the woods To find the Sol, I called to her... "I don't want to be forgotten...I never wanted to be human" NEVER!!!!!
So alas the sun had descended, her fire burned brilliant in the sky The trees bore their withered silhouettes, that cast a spell upon unearthly white No wolf shall keep his secrets, no bird shall dance the skyline And I am left with nothing but an oath that gleams like a sword To bathe in the blood of man Mankind...
It's a masterpiece psygnar ,,,your poem touches my very soul,
Your poem is dark,mystical,,rugged raw ,like drawing blood on a pale remote landscape it cuts into the poets raw emotional sense of being in isolation but awakened to the beauty of nature both in the darkness and light.
You are indeed a poet of this centruary,well done. .
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandOct 9, 2014
Hi psygnar
I just loved reading your wonderful poem..One I will read again...Remarkable! truly.
Thank you for sharing
Martina xxx
beautifulyouNew York, USAOct 9, 2014
This is not your poem or your song lyrics, psygnar. Uncool, to say the least.
These lyrics, at time 4:30, are from the band Agalloch - She Painted Fire Across the Skyline (Part I II III)
psygnarOPJleeb Al Shuyoukh, Al Farwaniyah KuwaitOct 11, 2014
@beautiful you - never claimed it was mine. hence i left the author title blank. if i did say it was mine or claimed it to be mine then my bad. i post stuff which means something to me and i care to share so you folk can know whats out there. Not like everyone knows whats out there and most people including myself miss out on alot.
beautifulyouNew York, USAOct 11, 2014
"@beautiful you - never claimed it was mine. hence i left the author title blank. if i did say it was mine or claimed it to be mine then my bad. i post stuff which means something to me and i care to share so you folk can know whats out there. Not like everyone knows whats out there and most people including myself miss out on alot."
psygnar, it is not if you did claim it as yours, you did in fact do that by not openly unclaiming it as yours. You did this in two ways.
One, you deliberately left the Author title blank... you did not directly credit Agalloch. Even if you "didn't know" the author of this work, you do know you did not write this and, you did not openly acknowledge that.
Two, you did not let the two women who commented (who thought this was written by you and highly complimented you as such) know that YOUdid not write this.
If you want to share someone else's work because it means something to you, or so "you folk can know whats out there", then, by all means, give proper credit so we truly know what's out there, and share what you personally want to share in the "About this poem" space alloted any poem or artistic work.
Anything short of that is plagiarism making any pretentious 'oops' or 'my bad' pretty serious.
psygnarOPJleeb Al Shuyoukh, Al Farwaniyah KuwaitOct 12, 2014
@beautifulyou smh and just a little heads up, the same song is posted on the share what you are listenning to thread. part 8 (inernational forums space). Along with the other songs I'm sharing. so be my guest and do what u do best and i will do what i do best :) pe@ce
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Your poem is dark,mystical,,rugged raw ,like drawing blood on a pale remote landscape it cuts into the poets raw emotional sense of being in isolation but awakened to the beauty of nature both in the darkness and light.
You are indeed a poet of this centruary,well done. .
I just loved reading your wonderful poem..One I will read again...Remarkable! truly.
Thank you for sharing
Martina xxx
psygnar. Uncool, to say the least.
These lyrics, at time 4:30, are from the band Agalloch - She Painted Fire Across the Skyline (Part I II III)
if i did say it was mine or claimed it to be mine then my bad.
i post stuff which means something to me and i care to share so you folk can know whats out there. Not like everyone knows whats out there and most people including myself miss out on alot.
if i did say it was mine or claimed it to be mine then my bad.
i post stuff which means something to me and i care to share so you folk can know whats out there. Not like everyone knows whats out there and most people including myself miss out on alot."
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psygnar, it is not if you did claim it as yours, you did in fact do that by not openly unclaiming it as yours. You did this in two ways.
One, you deliberately left the Author title blank... you did not directly credit Agalloch. Even if you "didn't know" the author of this work, you do know you did not write this and, you did not openly acknowledge that.
Two, you did not let the two women who commented (who thought this was written by you and highly complimented you as such) know that YOU did not write this.
If you want to share someone else's work because it means something to you, or so "you folk can know whats out there", then, by all means, give proper credit so we truly know what's out there, and share what you personally want to share in the "About this poem" space alloted any poem or artistic work.
Anything short of that is plagiarism making any pretentious 'oops' or 'my bad' pretty serious.
smh
and just a little heads up, the same song is posted on the share what you are listenning to thread. part 8 (inernational forums space). Along with the other songs I'm sharing.
so be my guest and do what u do best and i will do what i do best :)
pe@ce