Does anybody feel my pain?

WHAT IN THE HELL is that clicking
That... ticking I hear
Ringing so loudly
In my ear?!

It echoes
With cacophony
Deep and profound
Why do I hate this
Deafening sound?

In the silence of my room
Late here at night
It rings like a boom
Until daylight

It's been happening for years
It's source has me dumbfounded
If you say you can't hear it
Well then I'm astounded

It started just about
When we were ripped apart...

wait...

could it be...

the beating of my heart?

In the silent solace of
Lonely demise
I hear it most
As I close my eyes
And alone drift away
Into solitary slumber
My days of loneliness
Becoming too many
to number

My eyes cry tears
Down like rain
Is there anyone out there
Who can feel my pain?
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Posted: Mar 2010
About this poem:
I've been a widow for 16 years. Though I have moved on, now that I'm single again, sometimes, I miss my husband, especially late at night when I am alone. I think about the days, how they have passed, how much has happened... and how I am alone to enjoy them, mourn them, engage them and ignore them.

Poems like this help me get through the notion that the moment his soul was set free, mine was chained to misery.

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Comments (9)

paloma66
Of course,I feel your pain I went through the pain,now its beginning to ease,I've been a widow longer than you...Just could not make up mind to trust another man.Try expressing your feelings through verse it helps...there are a lot of lovely people here on poets corner,Hope you will come out of this as I am now doing so gradually.hug comfort
solong
crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying
EdenzGarden
thank you all for your comments... i appreciate the support... I do well most of the time... it has been 16 years and I have had another relationship since then... but now that one has ended (for 2 years now) and as a single woman I am realizing how much I lost.

again, thank you...
hedistuff
wonderful writing. I really like this.
trurorob
very emotional poem!
rob
john0217
i don't know what words to say but let god guide you into the silence
laura139
ditto, very emotional....I hope your pain has lessened a bit...wine
Blacksttud40
EdenzGarden.........

This is very nicely composed, very emotional poem.

"Is there anyone out there Who can feel my pain? " I love this fine end.... bouquet
agoodguy2have
EdenzGarden is growing again...thank you
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