Dreaming

I was sleeping in dream state,
I was with you,
We were alone,
It was only us two,
Deep in my sleep I was holding you close,
It was then that I awoke,
With tearing eyes and closing throat,
I gasped aloud and almost choked,
As if surrounded by clouds of smoke,
The waves cascaded and my heart broke,
I realized that I was alone,
That it was only me inside my home,
And you were gone forever more,
Grief shaking my very core,
I only wished to go back to sleep,
Where we were happy and you were with me...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2015
About this poem:
Sometimes dreams are so real...

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Abby1963
Yes the sweet dreams always seem real Great poem ! heart wings heart wings hug
beautifulyou
wow, mad drinking

intensely poignant
beautifully deep poem!
trurorob
We all do it Tony, good read.
Rob
darkhorse555
oh how i relate smiling excellent pen tony beautifully painted angel grin
lindsyjonesonline today!
Tony, sometimes only in dreams do love truly feels life is good.

Take care.
Titania48
Delightful poem Tony.
madtat29
Ty Friends...
soulgoddess
Dreaming are as real as it can be....

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Nuwahri61
That's intense Mad............awesome write bro..........Regards Nu cheers
madtat29
Beautiful pic SG...Ty
madtat29
Thanks Nu...
madtat29
Sorry if comments aren't responded to lately...been in a funk friends...hope it's over soon....mad love to you all
bard76
Tony, great poem, sometimes we dream to escape, sometimes our dreams escape us....take care.....David.....
madtat29
Isn't that the way of it David...Good to see ya bud
godsprincessonline today!
Dreams of loved ones passed away are very hard. You wake up all excited to see them again and "poof" their gone. Very poignant poem - thank you so much for sharing. Take care. Pray you'll feel better.

angel2 teddybear
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