Would you like to hear a song I just finished it today It is such a lovely song Grab a chair while I play
It's been hidden for a while Waiting shrouded in a haze It may even help you smile When entangled in a maze
It won't hit you like a gong In a land of broken deals Where they sell you for a song In the name of empty thrills
It won't send you running wild Trying each and every way It will soothe your inner child And is mild for every day
Would you like to hear my song It will help you win the race It will keep you going strong 'Til you reach a better place
Would you like to hear this song.
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Posted: Apr 2015
About this poem:
First published some years ago on a major poetry site, this little piece made their representative book/cd set for that year. A slow,bluesy tune goes with it when it's performed.
socrates44San Fernando, Trinidad and TobagoApr 25, 2015
pjatheart
In "About this poem", you stated this poem was first published some years ago on a major poetry site. Did you write it yourself? If not, then you should not post your name as the Author.
I have posted poetry written by others, but I always state the name of the author who wrote it in keeping with the policy stated by CS.
The poem itself has a lovely rhyming scheme.
Have a nice day!
pjatheartOPCanoga Park, California USAApr 25, 2015
Yes sir,right under the title it indicates that I'm the author. If I was not,it would state otherwise. I realize that it's very primitive,but all my "poems" are lyrics to my songs,and I have to keep it simple to flow with the music.
pjatheartOPCanoga Park, California USAApr 25, 2015
Also,if you read my other poem published few days ago, you will instantly recognize it's similarity in style.
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In "About this poem", you stated this poem was first published some years ago on a major poetry site. Did you write it yourself? If not, then you should not post your name as the Author.
I have posted poetry written by others, but I always state the name of the author who wrote it in keeping with the policy stated by CS.
The poem itself has a lovely rhyming scheme.
Have a nice day!
If I was not,it would state otherwise. I realize that it's very primitive,but all my "poems" are lyrics to my songs,and I have to keep it simple to flow with the music.
you will instantly recognize it's similarity in style.