The Perfect Pick

Would you like to hear a song
I just finished it today
It is such a lovely song
Grab a chair while I play

It's been hidden for a while
Waiting shrouded in a haze
It may even help you smile
When entangled in a maze

It won't hit you like a gong
In a land of broken deals
Where they sell you for a song
In the name of empty thrills

It won't send you running wild
Trying each and every way
It will soothe your inner child
And is mild for every day

Would you like to hear my song
It will help you win the race
It will keep you going strong
'Til you reach a better place

Would you like to hear this song.
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Posted: Apr 2015
About this poem:
First published some years ago on a major poetry site,
this little piece made their representative book/cd set
for that year. A slow,bluesy tune goes with it
when it's performed.

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socrates44online today!
pjatheart

In "About this poem", you stated this poem was first published some years ago on a major poetry site. Did you write it yourself? If not, then you should not post your name as the Author.

I have posted poetry written by others, but I always state the name of the author who wrote it in keeping with the policy stated by CS.

The poem itself has a lovely rhyming scheme.

Have a nice day!
pjatheart
Yes sir,right under the title it indicates that I'm the author.
If I was not,it would state otherwise. I realize that it's very primitive,but all my "poems" are lyrics to my songs,and I have to keep it simple to flow with the music.
pjatheart
Also,if you read my other poem published few days ago,
you will instantly recognize it's similarity in style.
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