poured a glass of life and drunk half got a phone call from possibilities and a knock on the door from reality but my best friend faith texted me and had a date with adventure and slept with my dream and awoken by determination hitting my door letting me know fear and failure was looking for me but I'm not worried because my friends journey and work ethic and focus will kick fear and failure's a**!
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Posted: May 2015
About this poem:
just a lil something something for all my poet's world wide
shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKMay 29, 2015
hi Jay good pen and sentiments here, you change past and present though. Try using slept in line "and sleep with my dream) and focus instead of focused in 2nd to last line that would give a better flow to a good write hugs
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