The Keys to Lasting Love.
The thorny path to love is ne'er smooth,
As blinded so many dare ramble,
With many inflicted scars to sooth,
Entangled in its briars and bramble.
Respect and equality are high on the list,
None seeking control of the other,
Take nothing for granted and always persist
To share hugs, but don't try to smother.
Don't live in your shadows, take time on your own,
Each person entitled to this,
Demands and shortcomings are best left alone,
Avoid falling in bitter abyss.
Be there for your lover like strong back bone,
Make Love ! ... for its Gods special gift,
And when you're apart you won't feel alone,
Contentment your hearts will lift.
It's better to listen than it is to talk,
Have fun ! ...it helps stop the rust,
Share things together if only a walk,
Positivity will strengthen your trust.
And lastly forgiveness in love is huge,
The word that turns misery to bliss,
Bring these keys with you to seek refuge,
And trade them all in for a kiss.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2015
About this poem:
Re-release for Valentines.
Comments (33)
What a Beautiful Sunday Morning Thought!
Have a blessed week, Mick!
pHIL;
Kathy
Most of the love poems I have viewed both on Poetry Corner and elsewhere, seem to focus either on the the feelings of ecstasy and bliss when the love is blooming or on the agony and despair when the love has died or is dying.
This poem is exceptional since it provides valuable advice and guidance on romantic love, in keeping with your well-chosen title "The Keys to Lasting Love".
Congrats to you for posting this piece.
Take Care.
Really enjoyed reading this..Much wisdom in there..
And some great advice too..
Nice job..
I appreciate your comment.
Regards Mick.
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Many thanks.....Mick.
kind remarks....
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Thank you for all your support.
Kind regards Mick.
kind visit....
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No "Agony Aunt" has ever come up with better advice for the preservation of a good relationship than this, and all so expertly summarised in the last stanza.
You could have earned a fortune with your own newspaper column dispensing advice like this Mick...
Cheers
Bill
Just beautiful!
Martina xxx
Rob
Regards Mick.
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Always a pleasure !
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So simple and adorned with magic that words surely provide in the eyes of bonafide beholder from the other side of the mirror.
B.
“ it’s better to listen than it is to talk” is the one I like the most.
Regards Mick
Thank you.