The Keys to Lasting Love.

The thorny path to love is ne'er smooth,
As blinded so many dare ramble,
With many inflicted scars to sooth,
Entangled in its briars and bramble.

Respect and equality are high on the list,
None seeking control of the other,
Take nothing for granted and always persist
To share hugs, but don't try to smother.

Don't live in your shadows, take time on your own,
Each person entitled to this,
Demands and shortcomings are best left alone,
Avoid falling in bitter abyss.

Be there for your lover like strong back bone,
Make Love ! ... for its Gods special gift,
And when you're apart you won't feel alone,
Contentment your hearts will lift.

It's better to listen than it is to talk,
Have fun ! ...it helps stop the rust,
Share things together if only a walk,
Positivity will strengthen your trust.

And lastly forgiveness in love is huge,
The word that turns misery to bliss,
Bring these keys with you to seek refuge,
And trade them all in for a kiss.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2015
About this poem:
Re-release for Valentines.

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Comments (33)

candykid
An artistic interpretation of the required ingredients for success in any relationship. .....Well written Mick....cheers
soulgoddess
teddybear angel hug

What a Beautiful Sunday Morning Thought!
Have a blessed week, Mick!
reguiny2006
Hello Mick, Our Sundays should now be better after reading your well penned advice.
pHIL;cheers
godsprincessonline today!
Ahh! The ideal couple. Something to strive for. Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing this sunny Sunday! teddybear

Kathy bouquet rose rose rose rose
Abby1963
Beautiful poem mick hug heart wings heart wings
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Mick
Most of the love poems I have viewed both on Poetry Corner and elsewhere, seem to focus either on the the feelings of ecstasy and bliss when the love is blooming or on the agony and despair when the love has died or is dying.

This poem is exceptional since it provides valuable advice and guidance on romantic love, in keeping with your well-chosen title "The Keys to Lasting Love".
Congrats to you for posting this piece. handshake
Take Care.
Titania48
This poem should be read by everyone, there is so much truth here. Thank you Mick for sharing this Gem. hug purple heart
twazzle70
How very pleasant guv,nor..beer
Really enjoyed reading this..Much wisdom in there..

And some great advice too..
Nice job..cheers bouquet
Mizzy4
Thank you Christian,
I appreciate your comment.

Regards Mick.

beer
Mizzy4
Thank you Angeline.
teddybear

Regards Mick.
Mizzy4
Cheers Phil.....many thanks !

Mick. wave
Mizzy4
Thanks for you kind comment Kathy,

Regards Mick.

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Mizzy4
Thank you Laura....peace

Regards Mick.
Mizzy4
I appreciate your lovely review Socrates...

Many thanks.....Mick.

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Mizzy4
Thank you Ladygwen for your
kind remarks....

Regards Mick.

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Mizzy4
Always lovely to hear from you Dear Titania,

Thank you for all your support. hug


Kind regards Mick.

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niah9
You express love perfectly Mizzy, giving guidance with such clarity.....for a long-term relationship......the hardest to maintain......Kathy...applause
Mizzy4
Thank you Twazzle for your
kind visit....

Regards Mick.

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GadfIy
Hi Mick

No "Agony Aunt" has ever come up with better advice for the preservation of a good relationship than this, and all so expertly summarised in the last stanza.

You could have earned a fortune with your own newspaper column dispensing advice like this Mick... wink

Cheers

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rapturecapture
Hi Mick


Just beautiful! bouquet


Martina xxxhug teddybear
trurorob
Another great pen Mick.
Rob
Mizzy4
Thank you Kathy for commenting...

Regards Mick.

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Mizzy4
Thank you Bill for another lovely visit......

Regards Mick.

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Mizzy4
Thank you Martina...
Always a pleasure !

Regards Mick.

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Mizzy4
Many thanks for your comment Rob....

Regards Mick.

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Mizzy4
Happy Valentines to all. heart beating
AutumnChild
Spetacular piece of written content, Mick.
So simple and adorned with magic that words surely provide in the eyes of bonafide beholder from the other side of the mirror.

B.

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EXRED3
This one Missy has lasted the test of time, still relevant thumbs up
yaspark
You gave us important keys here Mick,
“ it’s better to listen than it is to talk” is the one I like the most.handshake
Mizzy4
Many thanks AutumnChild for your kind reviews always.

Regards Mick

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Mizzy4
Thank you Exred for reading and leaving a kind comment.

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Mizzy4
Glad you got something from this Yaspark,
Thank you.

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southmiami4321online today!
Your keys to lasting love are so true, Mizzy. Each one unlocks the door to a cherished love relationship. I just wanted to add something. Knowing each other's LOVE LANGUAGE can really change the outcomes of any relationship. I invite everyone to look up " The Five Love Languages". Not suggesting any author, whoever can fill your case. Thanks, Mizzy for your inspired poem and wisdom on this topic that builds our lives every day no matter what age. SM heart wings
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