Remnants..

Entwined we stared upon the starry night,
White spiderwebs adorned the woods like lace,
The cold moon wore a garland of pale light,
That cast gold radiance around your face.

But new love's bloom can slowly turn to grey,
And promise drips like candle grease it seems.
When our eyes met, I should have turned away,
Cruel passing time did not respect our dreams.

Oh reader fond, do not misunderstand,
These remnants of past love hold no disdain,
Love stories are not always built on sand,
And broken hearts won't always harbour pain.

Much better to have loved and let it go,
Than never to have felt your heart aglow.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2022
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Fond memories...

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Comments (18)

AutumnChild
Lovely, Mick.
Splendid description of affection is used in this sonnet in relation between two beings bonded with a gush of romantic emotions.
Debrises stay as carved letters on the surface of some bole.
With diverse stories of their own tellers.

Pozdravljam te! wave handshake heart beating
AutumnChild
DEBRIS.....
To correct promptly my accidental error with non-existent plural form of mentioned noun.

professor wave
Abby1963
Lovely write Mick , and it’s so nice to see that you say it’s much better to have loved and let it go than to have felt your heart aglow ,such beautiful words teddybear
salamuna
lovely poem and wise words Mick. "Much better to have loved and let it go,
Than never to have felt your heart aglow." love brings light into our lives, no matter how it ends... Lily
hug
Oceanzest
good temporary but incomplete cure for trauma Mick, usually comes well packaged laugh
Good post
southmiami4321online today!
Sweet sonnet. Memories of past loves are always in our hearts. Many bring a smile other a tear down our cheeks but it's our life. Being able to love and be loved is a gift. Thanks for sharing Mick. heart wings SM
gnj4u
Hi, Mizzy4,
White spiderwebs adorned the woods like lace
Love this imagery (though I first read it as While).
Yes, one should never turn away from love; for, as the poet proves, a beautiful life-quilt can be stitched from Remnants... Thanks for sharing.
yaspark
“ Much better to have loved…”, beautiful poem Mick, thank you!wave
Mizzy4
Thank you for the kind feedback AutumnChild. Glad you liked the poem.

Regards Mick.

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Mizzy4
Thank you Laura, for your nice comments.

Regards Mick.


peace
Mizzy4
Always good to hear your feedback Lily,
Thank you.

Regards Mick.

hug
EXRED3
ah that touched me and its true too. Good read
Mizzy4
I agree Ocean.....Cheers !

beer
Mizzy4
Thanks for your feedback SM,

wine
Mizzy4
Thank you Joy,
Glad you enjoyed reading.

Regards Mick.

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optimisticmeonline today!
I liked that, well written. good job!
lilygold76
What a wonderful poem Mick...a beautiful picture of love you have composed.thumbs up
EXRED3
I second that lilly lovely poem Mizzy thumbs up
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