Entwined we stared upon the starry night, White spiderwebs adorned the woods like lace, The cold moon wore a garland of pale light, That cast gold radiance around your face.
But new love's bloom can slowly turn to grey, And promise drips like candle grease it seems. When our eyes met, I should have turned away, Cruel passing time did not respect our dreams.
Oh reader fond, do not misunderstand, These remnants of past love hold no disdain, Love stories are not always built on sand, And broken hearts won't always harbour pain.
Much better to have loved and let it go, Than never to have felt your heart aglow.
AutumnChildUnknown, Central Serbia SerbiaJan 21, 2022
Lovely, Mick. Splendid description of affection is used in this sonnet in relation between two beings bonded with a gush of romantic emotions. Debrises stay as carved letters on the surface of some bole. With diverse stories of their own tellers.
Pozdravljam te!
AutumnChildUnknown, Central Serbia SerbiaJan 21, 2022
DEBRIS..... To correct promptly my accidental error with non-existent plural form of mentioned noun.
Lovely write Mick , and it’s so nice to see that you say it’s much better to have loved and let it go than to have felt your heart aglow ,such beautiful words
lovely poem and wise words Mick. "Much better to have loved and let it go, Than never to have felt your heart aglow." love brings light into our lives, no matter how it ends... Lily
OceanzestHamilton, Waikato New ZealandJan 22, 2022
good temporary but incomplete cure for trauma Mick, usually comes well packaged Good post
Sweet sonnet. Memories of past loves are always in our hearts. Many bring a smile other a tear down our cheeks but it's our life. Being able to love and be loved is a gift. Thanks for sharing Mick. SM
Hi, Mizzy4, White spiderwebs adorned the woods like lace Love this imagery (though I first read it as While). Yes, one should never turn away from love; for, as the poet proves, a beautiful life-quilt can be stitched from Remnants... Thanks for sharing.
yasparkWilliamsville, New York USAJan 23, 2022
“ Much better to have loved…”, beautiful poem Mick, thank you!
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Splendid description of affection is used in this sonnet in relation between two beings bonded with a gush of romantic emotions.
Debrises stay as carved letters on the surface of some bole.
With diverse stories of their own tellers.
Pozdravljam te!
To correct promptly my accidental error with non-existent plural form of mentioned noun.
Than never to have felt your heart aglow." love brings light into our lives, no matter how it ends... Lily
Good post
White spiderwebs adorned the woods like lace
Love this imagery (though I first read it as While).
Yes, one should never turn away from love; for, as the poet proves, a beautiful life-quilt can be stitched from Remnants... Thanks for sharing.
Regards Mick.
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Thank you.
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Regards Mick.