On our life's path so oft' we'll find a bend, When daylight pales a cloudy sombre hue, Such darkness will seem brighter with a friend, My hope instilled, for I am blessed with two.
Good friends are scarce, as rare as precious jewels, Who don't intrude and yet are never far, To discard friendship is a trait of fools, How bleak the nightsky bearing just one star.
When Angels beckon one I hope it's me, No joy in being bereft to grieve alone, For now we'll live and laugh as comrades three, Our names not etched as yet on marble stone.
So in salute I raise a glass of wine, And toast 'Good Health' for two good friends of mine.
good tribute, Mick and a beautiful sonnet. "Good friends are scarce, as rare as precious jewels". absolutely right! i wish 'Good Health' for three of you. Lily
Hi Mick, this is an astounding piece of poetry for your two friends. It is such a wonderful Sonnet, so skillfully written. The flow, the rhyme and the rhythm are perfect. You know how to truly sing my friend. Have a wonderful Sunday....Mike.
Hi, Mizzy4, On our life's path so oft' we'll find a bend, When daylight pales a cloudy sombre hue, Such darkness will seem brighter with a friend, A true friend is the best life has to offer! Lucky you to have two life-long ones. Thanks for sharing your lovely sonnet to honor them.
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Rob
Regards Mick.
We can't survive on our own.
Regards Mick.
Good to see you back,
Regards Mick,
On our life's path so oft' we'll find a bend,
When daylight pales a cloudy sombre hue,
Such darkness will seem brighter with a friend,
A true friend is the best life has to offer! Lucky you to have two life-long ones. Thanks for sharing your lovely sonnet to honor them.
Regards Mick.
Hope all is well.
Regards Mick.
Always appreciate your feedback.
Regards Mick.
Even one friend is worth having.
for those that replied
they are friends too
and i hope to make u glad
Yes I have more friends... Two of them are very special.
Regards Mick.