If I Could Question Love.

Such joyous Love, why do you make me weep ?
This heart so warm, yet aches without relent,
My mind so tired, still you deprive my sleep,
Each waking hour consumed with sweet torment.
Why do I fall so heavy for your charms ?
Besotted by the lure of womanhood,
And when I'm wrapped in calming female arms,
Why do you raise wild torrents in my blood ?
So many hearts you break with utter grief,
Oh Love, why must we toil to be your slave ?
How can you be so fickle and so brief ?
And yet for some, endure beyond the grave.
The answers lie within Love's tangled mire,
Strewn amidst the agony and the fire
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Posted: Oct 29
About this poem:
My own challenge entry.

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salamuna
Hi Mick. One more beautiful sonnet from you
"So many hearts you break with utter grief,
Oh Love, why must we toil to be your slave ?
How can you be so fickle and so brief ?"
that"s a wonderful feeling and also often a sad one..

Lily teddybear
daradloff
I carved Tiffany today, I also cut my finger which is only appropriate since she is pretty bad in the movie Bride of Chucky.daydream detective jackolantern
Oceanzest
very classical Mick, don't read em like that too often, enjoyed. beer
carlameeonline today!
Nice poem.

"So many hearts you break with utter grief,
Oh Love, why must we toil to be your slave ?
How can you be so fickle and so brief ?"


I don't think love is fickle.
Humans and their emotions are the Rollercoaster.

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Mizzy4
Always good to read your comments Lily, I hope all is well in Deventer.

Mick.hug
Mizzy4
Daradloff,Ocean & Carlamee,
Thank you all for your feedback.

Regards Mick.
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ladyjewel
Hi Mike, love the writing, full of feeling and warmth wave
*Smiles* also love the challenge, feels like long ago in this corner, we often had challenges and it seems like this lovely poetry corner is coming back to life wine teddybear
Mizzy4
Many thanks for your comments LadyJewel,
The challenge is still open if you feel like sharing a love story in verse.
wink

Regards Mick.
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