Such joyous Love, why do you make me weep ? This heart so warm, yet aches without relent, My mind so tired, still you deprive my sleep, Each waking hour consumed with sweet torment. Why do I fall so heavy for your charms ? Besotted by the lure of womanhood, And when I'm wrapped in calming female arms, Why do you raise wild torrents in my blood ? So many hearts you break with utter grief, Oh Love, why must we toil to be your slave ? How can you be so fickle and so brief ? And yet for some, endure beyond the grave. The answers lie within Love's tangled mire, Strewn amidst the agony and the fire
Hi Mick. One more beautiful sonnet from you "So many hearts you break with utter grief, Oh Love, why must we toil to be your slave ? How can you be so fickle and so brief ?" that"s a wonderful feeling and also often a sad one..
Hi Mike, love the writing, full of feeling and warmth *Smiles* also love the challenge, feels like long ago in this corner, we often had challenges and it seems like this lovely poetry corner is coming back to life
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"So many hearts you break with utter grief,
Oh Love, why must we toil to be your slave ?
How can you be so fickle and so brief ?"
that"s a wonderful feeling and also often a sad one..
Lily
"So many hearts you break with utter grief,
Oh Love, why must we toil to be your slave ?
How can you be so fickle and so brief ?"
I don't think love is fickle.
Humans and their emotions are the Rollercoaster.
Mick.
Thank you all for your feedback.
Regards Mick.
*Smiles* also love the challenge, feels like long ago in this corner, we often had challenges and it seems like this lovely poetry corner is coming back to life
The challenge is still open if you feel like sharing a love story in verse.
Regards Mick.