will I ever find my soulmate my friend my lover that will hold me make love to me under the covers wipe my tears when I'm sad yell at me when things go bad if they do will we forgive each other through those times yes we do this is my soulmate my lover my friend as I'm his he's mine until the end
Will I ever find my soulmate My friend my lover That will hold me Make love to me under the covers Wipe my tears when I'm sad Yell at me when things go bad If they do Will we forgive each other through those times,yes we do This is my soulmate my lover My friend As I'm his he's mine until the end
Nice first poem, you can touch " Edit my poem" if you want to make corrections. Happy writing, look forward to see more poems .
shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKJun 1, 2015
I agree with Paul that putting it into sentences gives more of an impact. Whatever, it is still very good hugs
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May I arrange your lines? ! ? !
Will I ever find my soulmate
My friend my lover
That will hold me
Make love to me under the covers
Wipe my tears when I'm sad
Yell at me when things go bad
If they do
Will we forgive each other
through those times,yes we do
This is my soulmate my lover My friend
As I'm his he's mine until the end
Nice first poem, you can touch " Edit my poem" if you want to make corrections. Happy writing, look forward to see more poems .