A Parallel Universe

by soulgoddessTokyo, Kanto, Japan

Jul 2015 1,823 Views 22 comments

A Parallel Universe

(A Collaborative Poem with Christian Candykid)

A tapestry of telepathy, he knows that he's lost...
She waits for his whispers, he suffers the cost...
In parallel planes there are mirrors that divide...
And mirrors that decide to unite...

A ripple distorted the reflections of whispering echoes...
Igniting hope between two worlds never touching...
One reaching, the other one fleeting...
As liquid diamonds drip from her eyes...

Clairvoyant submission beyond natural-born vision...
Arms reaching searching for transparent collisions...
Precision decisions reflect crystal clear visions...
Apparitions appear before starlit renditions...

Blinded by the sun's bright and blinding conditions...
They are each spellbound by photo-framed solar rays...
With invisible strands, he crushes stars in his hands...
But unity in reality is light years away...

And so he stands in the center of the sun...
Mirrors of lost time reveal she is the one...
After thousands of years, searching thousands of mirrors...
They've found each other in tears....

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Posted: Jul 2015

About this poem:

This is an enjoyable collaboration with Christian Candykid on a fantasy theme. Beautifully blending a logical/pragmatic mind with an imaginative/creative mind. He is very wonderful to work with.

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Comments (22)

Abby1963California, USAJul 7, 2015

Awesome colbration you two wrote a beautiful poem

paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandJul 7, 2015

What a wonderful collaboration,it was so good reading this from two beautiful minds.

soulgoddessOPTokyo, Kanto JapanJul 12, 2015

Thank you Abby for your kind visit and comment

soulgoddessOPTokyo, Kanto JapanJul 12, 2015

Thank you paloma66 for your kind visit and comment

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandJul 13, 2015

Hi Angeline & Christian,

A very impressive fusion of two
great writers.
Most enjoyable read !

Regards Mick.

online today!

godsprincessOwego, New York USAJul 13, 2015

Very beautiful and descriptive - congratulations. Thank you for writing together and sharing.

Kathy

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godsprincessOwego, New York USAJul 13, 2015

Very beautiful and descriptive - congratulations. Thank you for writing together and sharing.

Kathy

soulgoddessOPTokyo, Kanto JapanAug 10, 2015

Thank you Mick for your wonderful comment

candykidAshburn, Virginia USASep 8, 2015

Abby....I truly thank you for that kind comment. I must give 100 percent credit to Angeline for the results of this compilation. She is truly a remarkable inspiration, and is extremely adaptable in her writing skills. ...I thank you once again.

aviasSoutheast, Missouri USASep 9, 2015

Christian/soulgoddess...You two created an inspiring poem with equally inspiring graphics added...Thanks for sharing....Avias/Harriett

candykidAshburn, Virginia USASep 19, 2015

Thank you Paloma. ....this ended up being an extremely interesting collaboration. ...both Angeline and myself have highly individual writing styles that at first glance would seem impossible to blend in a correct manner suitable for one's reading pleasure. It brings me great joy to read that it did in fact strike a positive chord with you.

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAJan 13, 2016

Mick, I thank you for that kind and specific feedback, you are missed upon this corner. I hope that this New Year will become your very best ever.

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAApr 19, 2016

Thank you Harriet for that fine assesment. ..

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAJan 2, 2017

Kathy, I doubly thank you for those fine comments. ....this was one of my favorites, as it was a collaboration with a dear friend of mine. Thank you so much for those killer comments. ...

PedroDavidRomanOsaka, Kansai JapanJun 29, 2017

Pretty deep! It will require some more reading and time! (^_^) I like your interests and the things you wrote on your profile. Would love to talk more.

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAJun 30, 2017

Hello Pedro.....While I have never made your acguantice, I can only tell you that Soulgoddess is an amazingly beautiful person, both on the inside and out. She is however highly elusive. I appreciate your compliments regarding this write, and I feel an equal amount of joy that you have found a kinship in her profile details. She is really special, thanks for the feedback....