My Dominican Angel

When i think about you all i have to do is close my eyes and your their distance and fate is completely erased in my mind just seeing your sweet face the thought of holding you makes my heart stop just long enough to hand it to you i know you will keep it safe not wanting to see tears run down my face your a beautiful person with a heart to match so i wrote you this poem cuz i want are friendship to last until we are together at last
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2009
About this poem:
This poem was written with love for my dreamgirl sent from up above letting her know she's close in my heart only distance keeps us far apart

Poems entered on these pages are copyrighted by the authors who entered them. They cannot be reproduced without the author's written consent. © Copyright 2001-2024. All rights reserved.

Post Comment

Comments (9)

courage
Lovely poem, elsewhere. She is a very lucky girl. I hope she know that! Take care. God Bless You. Peace and Hugs!
cherie50
pure lovely
elsewhere
thank you cherie it's not even close to as lovely as you are teddybear angel peace
elsewhere
hi courage thank you for the compliment i really like her alot im very happy i met her here and met you here to i love good people and angels god bless you to cherie angel peace teddybear
haier
Your poems is beautiful i actualy read the hole thing to the end with out stoping or pausing. you would think it confusing with out any periods but its realy better as all one.
katie40
keep up the good workdancing
elsewhere
thank you katie and haier im new at poetry i'll keep trying to write better ones i guess it does look better without periods are poems supposed to having periods i don't know it streams better without i think good luck to both of you god blessangel peace teddybear thumbs up thumbs up bouquet
Hevenstouch
That was just so warm and sweet , thank you for sharing and don't give up . Life is full of surprises.
elsewhere
thanks hevenstouch i'll never give up on love and i love suprises i do believe your rite im happy you enjoyed the poem thank you for the compliments i'll keep writing poems i like writing them good luck with everything god bless i hope you get a suprise to only good angel peace teddybear bouquet
Post Comment - Let others know what you think about this Poem
Report Abuse for this page, if inappropiate

Stats for this Poem

by Unknown
on Jun 2009
1,102 Views
in Love
Last Viewed: Apr 28
Last Commented: Jun 2009

Feeling Creative?

We use cookies to ensure that you have the best experience possible on our website. Read Our Privacy Policy Here