When i think about you all i have to do is close my eyes and your their distance and fate is completely erased in my mind just seeing your sweet face the thought of holding you makes my heart stop just long enough to hand it to you i know you will keep it safe not wanting to see tears run down my face your a beautiful person with a heart to match so i wrote you this poem cuz i want are friendship to last until we are together at last
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Posted: Jun 2009
About this poem:
This poem was written with love for my dreamgirl sent from up above letting her know she's close in my heart only distance keeps us far apart
Lovely poem, elsewhere. She is a very lucky girl. I hope she know that! Take care. God Bless You. Peace and Hugs!
cherie50pickerington, Ohio USAJun 7, 2009
pure lovely
elsewhereOPchicago, Illinois USAJun 7, 2009
thank you cherie it's not even close to as lovely as you are
elsewhereOPchicago, Illinois USAJun 7, 2009
hi courage thank you for the compliment i really like her alot im very happy i met her here and met you here to i love good people and angels god bless you to cherie
haierblissfield, Ohio USAJun 10, 2009
Your poems is beautiful i actualy read the hole thing to the end with out stoping or pausing. you would think it confusing with out any periods but its realy better as all one.
katie40kilkenny, Kilkenny IrelandJun 10, 2009
keep up the good work
elsewhereOPchicago, Illinois USAJun 10, 2009
thank you katie and haier im new at poetry i'll keep trying to write better ones i guess it does look better without periods are poems supposed to having periods i don't know it streams better without i think good luck to both of you god bless
HevenstouchChillicothe, Ohio USAJun 11, 2009
That was just so warm and sweet , thank you for sharing and don't give up . Life is full of surprises.
elsewhereOPchicago, Illinois USAJun 11, 2009
thanks hevenstouch i'll never give up on love and i love suprises i do believe your rite im happy you enjoyed the poem thank you for the compliments i'll keep writing poems i like writing them good luck with everything god bless i hope you get a suprise to only good
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