Will You Be My Roommate for Life

by LastStrikeHanoi, Red River Delta, Vietnam

Oct 2016 767 Views 8 comments

Will You Be My Roommate for Life?

Where are you hiding, my darling?
Are you missing me, your other half?
Let's come as one to fill our hearts
To show each other that love is true.

Full of me? I've not yet been through
Waiting for the crew to sail on the ship
Keep exploring until we finish
Inspire next generation with endless stories

My biggest dream, oh you know it's family
With cozy nights with frequent smiles on face
As the home nothing can replace
Will you be my roommate for life? ??

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Oct 2016

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lindsyjonesunknown, California USAOct 22, 2016

Last thank you for this lovely poem.

LastStrikeOPHanoi, Red River Delta VietnamOct 22, 2016

Thank you sis for your encouragement

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAOct 22, 2016

I found this poem to be written beautifully. I loved the different stages of the romance. And I to often ask "Where are you hiding, my darling?"

I am applauding your writing not my wondering where my darling hiding.

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAOct 22, 2016

I found this poem to be written beautifully. I loved the different stages of the romance. And I to often ask "Where are you hiding, my darling?"

I am applauding your writing not my wondering where my darling hiding.

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAOct 22, 2016

Sorry double posted

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAOct 22, 2016

You're cute as a button darling. You would
be just one big bundle of joy. (For a younger man of course). Lol.
Cafe

LastStrikeOPHanoi, Red River Delta VietnamOct 22, 2016

Thank you very much Happy

actually these 3 paragraphso were composed in 3 days. Love comes, helps us discover ourselves then helps builds family. But it's still a dream

LastStrikeOPHanoi, Red River Delta VietnamOct 23, 2016

Actually I have good older friends on here whose support I really appreciate. Still not many very few young people have approached me nicely. I don't know why

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