but you said

by Alex4400Rochester, New York, USA

Dec 2019 324 Views 3 comments

but you said.....

But you said
.....you liked me
so what happened
.....you liked spending time with me
so what happened
.....I was funny
so what happened
.....I made you pee your pants from laughter
so what happened
.....you were made for me
so what happened
.....I was made for you
so what happened
.....that you loved being near me
so what happened
.....you never wanted me out of reach
so what happened
.....you wanted to share your bed with me
so what happened
.....you wanted to wake up in my arms
so what happened
.....you looked at me and cried
so what happened
.....I was getting butterflies and sick to my stomach
so what happened
.....you said it first
so what happened
.....I reacted immediately and in kind
so what what happened
.....you just looked at me
so what happened
.....I was paralyzed
so what happened
It happened
we fell in love

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Posted: Dec 2019

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HotrodLarrysSt. Joseph, Missouri USADec 11, 2019

Very Nice Write, Like the way you formatted it, the colors you chose really glowed, and love was found, It doesn't get much better than that. Greatly Enjoyed!

Hotrodlarrys

Rachael_0622Big lake, Alaska USADec 11, 2019

Hi
I enjoyed reading your poem

People can pe puzzling
And not know what they want
Hard difficult to find an authentic genuine real friend
Rachael

Alex4400OPRochester, New York USADec 14, 2019

This was very spontaneous. I tried to weave the uncertainty of falling in love with the undeniable shift in one's biochemistry that falling in love can bring that is so scary to share; leaving yourself so vulnerable. As it happens it ended well.

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