I walked a long the weary lane,Of Browning trees as Autumn came.Alone with my dog and black thorn stick, In a nearby field where rabbits sit. They danced and played in the Autumn leaves, That fell like snowflakes from the trees. A burst of speed and a violent roar, And rabbits sit and play no more. A tall pine tree the wind brought down , to lay in contrast with the brown. But the brown again will turn to green, Where Autumn leaves so brown have been.
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Posted: Feb 2021
About this poem:
Childhood memories, memories of my two brothers Michael and Thomas RIP, Love you always,
Nice written piece Bid64. Autumn brings many nature changes in the color of the leaves. In Ohio were I lived for a very short time, in a few weeks these changes would come to pass and its beautiful. For those that lived there for years it was such a normal thing. Sorry it brought some melancholy feelings of your childhood but memories are what they are. SM
Nice setting of words.... Good poem on Autumn........it turns brown into green
gentlebill3Thurles, Tipperary IrelandJan 3, 2023
Hi,,I like your poem: It has warmth ,sorrow and hope Would,nt use weary Lane because it blightes the early feeling of warmth and happiness. There's a strong message conveyed with the arrival of winter and dying but hope and knowledge that life will once again emerge,born from spring. Lovely images And wrote from your heart and it shows,,well done
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Regards Mick.
One never forget his Childhood
The passed like wind which can't be captured
Patience is Blessing and Prayers remove pain.
It has warmth ,sorrow and hope
Would,nt use weary Lane because it blightes the early feeling of warmth and happiness. There's a strong message conveyed with the arrival of winter and dying but hope and knowledge that life will once again emerge,born from spring. Lovely images
And wrote from your heart and it shows,,well done
It makes one wish to be walking through autumn leaves as your beauty gently becomes the breeze.