Browning

I walked a long the weary lane,Of Browning trees as Autumn came.Alone with my dog and black thorn stick, In a nearby field where rabbits sit. They danced and played in the Autumn leaves, That fell like snowflakes from the trees. A burst of speed and a violent roar, And rabbits sit and play no more. A tall pine tree the wind brought down , to lay in contrast with the brown. But the brown again will turn to green, Where Autumn leaves so brown have been.
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Posted: Feb 2021
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Childhood memories, memories of my two brothers Michael and Thomas RIP, Love you always,

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Bid64
Lol sorry about mistake, my brothers passed away many years ago.teddybear
La_Femme_en_Bleu
Beautiful nostalgia, I love this autumn writing happy place angel2
Jeannineanne
That's Beautiful, how are things with you Bid,hug
Bid64
thank you JAcheers
LeeJbritney
Motivational
Mizzy4
Nicely written poem,

Regards Mick.

angel
Bid64
Thank you all so much,angel hug
ali110online today!
Fantastic words and composition
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Bid64
Thank you Ali teddybear
southmiami4321online now!
Nice written piece Bid64. Autumn brings many nature changes in the color of the leaves. In Ohio were I lived for a very short time, in a few weeks these changes would come to pass and its beautiful. For those that lived there for years it was such a normal thing. Sorry it brought some melancholy feelings of your childhood but memories are what they are. SM wave hug
PassionatePoetonline today!
Nicely translated experience! Jim
timotie
Dear Bid angel
One never forget his Childhood heart wings
The passed like wind which can't be captured heart beating
Patience is Blessing and Prayers remove pain.
bouquet

peace
Bernician
Nicely written, more please.
Abby1963
Beautifully written thanks for sharing handshake
ZAKER
Nice setting of words.... Good poem on Autumn........it turns brown into green
gentlebill3
Hi,,I like your poem:
It has warmth ,sorrow and hope
Would,nt use weary Lane because it blightes the early feeling of warmth and happiness. There's a strong message conveyed with the arrival of winter and dying but hope and knowledge that life will once again emerge,born from spring. Lovely images
And wrote from your heart and it shows,,well done
Ninurtaonline today!
In quiet reflection you bring a unique introspection
It makes one wish to be walking through autumn leaves as your beauty gently becomes the breeze.
Lucky778
Lovely poem
Lucky778
Lovely poem teddybear
Amorillo
Sad to lose your brothers but they have inspired you to write this awesome poem ??
Marrahi
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salamuna
Hi Bid64! a really lovely poem you ve created. I'm simply fascinated by the way Irish people create musical imaginative poetry. Greetings, Lily bouquet
ladyjewelonline today!
Loved this, could picture it perfectly hug
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