The Opposites.

be it couples , be it elements ,
be it fire , be it water .
Always there is a mystery to them ,
the opposites.
their existence baffled many ,
baffled philosophy , baffled science .
some exist in conflict , some in harmony ,
the opposites.
ying yang , positive and negative ,
good and evil , light and dark .
balancing one another since the dawn of eons ,
the opposites.
in the origin with the big bang , in the every existing atom ,
in the age of the cave man , in the age of the modern man.
they were with the dawn of the universe and will be there till it ends ,
the opposites.
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Posted: Mar 2021
About this poem:
this is my amateur poetry on opposites . It began as a describing of couples who are opposites but completely transformed into a discription of opposites in their essence .
tell me what you think about it .

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Oceanzest
thought provoking.. thumbs up
LaceyQueen21
Thank you for sharing Aceguy, Interesting.. opposites create balance

"ying yang , positive and negative ,
good and evil , light and dark
balancing one another since the dawn of eons ,
the opposites."


. thumbs up cool
Yankee4you
I admire your willingness to banter into poetry..... and encourage your efforts.... handshake
Aceguy111
thankyou Mr Yankee . Well to tell you the truth im not much of a poetry buff , rather more into novels . But the metaphorical pattern of wording in the poetry has its special mystery which challenges the texts of the novels as well.
Mizzy4
Keep writing Aceguy,
Poetry is a cathartic means of self expression in compact script..
Interesting poem.

Regards Mick.

beer
Aceguy111
Thanks Mr Mick.head banger
Dan_777
I agree with your concept of opposites since we live in a world of duality.
There will always be black and white, good and bad etc..

But...if we were to move in a higher dimension, there would only be neutral.

Thought provoking.thumbs up
Aceguy111
i agree Dan , in fact i was considering about putting the neutral part in the line i wrote on the atom the proton the positive charge particle , the electron the negetive charge particle and the neutron the neutral charge particle . All three existing the very atom we're made of . But real point about opposites is the harmony in this corporeal world , the spiritual world is already a neutral harmony . But the main thing is harmony between opposites in our corporeal world . That's the beauty of it opposites represent diversity but unfortunately foul politics is put in that beautiful diversity , using it for conflict .
but the same diversity could be used to create harmony in the world , unity through diversity , harmony in the opposites .
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