Bliss

You flick your head back without a care,
As I run my fingers through your hair.
Exposing your neck, for me to kiss,
Oh for a moment such as this.

To hold you tender, warm and tight,
Wrap my arms around you, under a pale moonlight.
Whisper sweetly in your ear
My thoughts for you, so crystal clear.

But for now, it’s all only a dream,
To have you safe, so calm and serene.
Longing for that warm and tender kiss,
A moment in time, of delightful bliss.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2010
About this poem:
Thought of this while taking a shower this evening.
Had to jump out the shower quick to get it all down.
It's my first serious attempt at poetry, other than silly limericks or ditties.

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sweetlyscented1
applause WOW Mr P thats lovely indeed.......who would have thought hmmmmm

Asuming its about someone special,
Gosh she is a lucky lady who ever she is....sigh

Very well done Mr P bouquet
mychelle
Englisman
That's good poetry!
Next time stay longer in the shower and make all thebeautiful thoughts come to you!
agoodguy2have
well done first write but the ladies are wrong. if you don't write it down NOW ...it's gone. ;-)
Ladybee42
coola boola....cheering cheering....so you're on of those people that leaves the bathroom looking like a flood plain eh?? ah it was worth it this time.. applause applause
sweetlyscented1
applause wave kiss
jazzy75
Fantastic poem...glad you didn't slip! Welcome to poets corner..look forward to more of your writing :)
Happygolucky4u
Very sigh Ah he!! sometimes I best not say muchfoot in mouth Your poem was great. I must say it kept me in the momentconversing Please shower more and write write writegrin
Pixels1
This is really lovely wave
niah9
Hi Englishman55...glad you got it all down in time...and worth every moment it took.
Hope you don't wait too long for that kiss....Niahcheering cheering
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