how 'bout start a poem with a stanza...let the first comment be 2nd, so on...that kinda what you had in mind? Maybe a place to start? I'm game. let's see what the rest think. pink, never, opti, hedi, luke, carol, john, open...anybody else? Barrell starts 'cause it's his idea?
I've posed the start of poems soliciting for readers comments to continue it (much as agoodguytoknow mentions), to see where it may lead. Only Andrew offered a stanza (my apology should another also have played), and then it died. I'm not so sure this is what barrel has in mind. another interesting pastime, is rewriting another's work...I did some of this a bit in comments but only with they that would welcome and enjoy it (I cleared it with them first). one doesn't want to step on toes...infringe...embarass anyone. what is a constraint idea? guideline? I have little style....and if you don't believe me, then just go ask my wife.
chuck_007toronto, Ontario CanadaMay 13, 2010
Stanza? I'm not sure on the structureof a poem. I like to rhyme. And then change it up once and a while. I'm not even sure if half the stuff I write is considered poetry. But let me see a couple. Then let me give it a shot.
Blacksttud40Colombo, Western Sri LankaMay 13, 2010
Anything we can do as a group would be good, but I specifically was suggesting that we/you/I contact someone you like, or are friends with, or want to be friends with, or whatever, read each other's poetry, and then each person in the pair should try to write a poem in their partner's style (we all have style, even if you don't think you have one! ).
Or, instead of using each other's style, just write a poem about the other person, as an accumulation of what they present in their poetry.
I mean, do whatever you think is fun, for sure, I was just making some suggestions. :D If we could all do the same thing, that would be neat, but there are certainly not 'rules' to follow in our little corner (aside from the list of 'Poetry Rules 1 - 12' below the 'post comment' button. )
Anyone interested should just poke someone else, talk it over, and give it a shot. Give your poems a title prefix, so we know it's part of the activity.
Like 'In the style of Agoodguy2have': Title'
He's already got a hold of me, and we're going to be doing a write up on each other at the end of the week, or thereabouts.
there once was a woman called carol in her wake all men are left shaken should come as little surprise each time she bats her blue eyes yet another man's heart is taken
(I don't know your eyeshade, just needed a syllable)
freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USAMay 16, 2010
Ladybee42 and I did this, wrote a poem in each other's style. I wrote in my impression of her style: In the style of Ladybee42: As Darkness Closes In. She wrote in my style: In the style of Freeatlast 'Mikey'. Let us know what ya think...
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Not too long, I like that.
I'm not sure it conveys
the emotional depth you were going for though?
Or, instead of using each other's style, just write a poem about the other person, as an accumulation of what they present in their poetry.
I mean, do whatever you think is fun, for sure, I was just making some suggestions. :D If we could all do the same thing, that would be neat, but there are certainly not 'rules' to follow in our little corner (aside from the list of 'Poetry Rules 1 - 12' below the 'post comment' button. )
i'd love to give it a go - have never tried to write in someone else's 'style' before - but everyone does have a different style..
Like 'In the style of Agoodguy2have': Title'
He's already got a hold of me, and we're going to be doing a write up on each other at the end of the week, or thereabouts.
who forgot why she was here
she went into a den
with a man called Ben
and came out with only one ear...
This is my current standard. Beat it and I will write you a poem!
in her wake all men are left shaken
should come as little surprise
each time she bats her blue eyes
yet another man's heart is taken
(I don't know your eyeshade, just needed a syllable)
Have been busy lately, need to get a hold of goodguy, but will definitely check it out.
Now I'll have to read all the previous work of everyone in order to see how well people did for their partners!