Corvus Corax

That dark black bird
All stolid attitude
Perhaps indifferent
Or simply composed
Knowing what is worth his while
Casually disperses on the threat
Of less elegant, fluttering birds
Who are more nuisance than danger-
Both lifts and alights
On bended wing
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Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
I enjoy what I like to call 'bent-wing' birds.

That is, those which land with wings open, often bent, right before touching down, flapping slowly.

Smaller birds probably do this same thing, but the difference is that they do is so quickly, that it is more something that you *see* than something you *watch*.

If you think about it, this specific thing, I believe it lends a lot towards considering the difference in attitude, or personality, of larger birds versus smaller.

It does for me, anyhow.

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sophiasummer
something that you *see* than something you *watch*.

specere...

refreshing angel
agoodguy2have
B.O.A.: easy to see the elegance of the slower moving, larger birds, easy to read poem.
Barrellofart
( Corvus Corax is the Common Raven, I neglected to mention! beer )
Raven0
There's nothing 'common' about the Raven.
lol
Very good, even without the title, I would have seen that bird in my minds eye.
Barrellofart
Of course not. beer

I do, though, of course, refer to that specie, by their colloquial name.

I'd be very interested in knowing what local subspecies live here, as I find them more attractive by far than most of the other 'Common Ravens' that I've seen through research.
Blizza801
Great write !! I dig this a lot...made me think too about how maybe the black bird is hanging with the other less elegant birds hoping if the owl or hawk pops on by...the smaller more clueless birds will play the patsy...lol...just what came to mind.
I really liked it though
jazzy75
Stately and wise...your poem is :)
hedistuff
excellent...thanks
Witchaywoman
Cool poem. It sounds like a metaphor for using the forums. There's a great Renaissance band called Corvus Corax on Youtube. They seem to be a cross between Ren Faire nerds and soccer hopuligans. hee hee.
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