Always bade me 'good bye'

The very day I was born,the morning bade me 'good by'
Till then I am in complete darkness
The very day I was thirsty,the wide sea shore off from me
Till then I am quenching my thirst with unlimited dew-mist

The very day I went to the playground my friends bade me 'good bye'
Till then I am alone amidst the crowd
The very day I went to a bird
The bird stopped chirping and flew away
Bading me 'good bye'
Till then no sweet song reach to me

THe very day I told you I have fallen in love
You bade me 'good bye'
Till then I am searching you.

The very day I dreamt of a sweet dream
The sweet-dream bade me 'good bye'
And I am engrossed in dark dreaming


The very day I wrote a poetry
Poetry bade me 'good bye'
Till then I have no poetry.

But today I bid you 'good bye'
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Posted: Jun 2010

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Comments (4)

agoodguy2have
it's a searching poem Dalim, full of question and nuance. more will come i am sure when the muse strikes, come on back.
caroljoyce
This is quite a good poem. I can sense your alienation, abondonment yet you are not the only one, be assured. It will make you stronger, given time.sigh
gnj4u
Hi, Dalim,
Perhaps it is safe to say that all, at one time or another, have felt alone amidst the crowd. Your poem is very poignant and moving and clearly indicates the opposite of Poetry bade me 'good bye'. Without knowing the poet's meaning, I find hope in Till then I am quenching my thirst with unlimited dew-mist. Hello, Dalim, thank you for sharing your poetry with us.
NeverEndingStory
Good bye wave
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