The very day I was born,the morning bade me 'good by' Till then I am in complete darkness The very day I was thirsty,the wide sea shore off from me Till then I am quenching my thirst with unlimited dew-mist
The very day I went to the playground my friends bade me 'good bye' Till then I am alone amidst the crowd The very day I went to a bird The bird stopped chirping and flew away Bading me 'good bye' Till then no sweet song reach to me
THe very day I told you I have fallen in love You bade me 'good bye' Till then I am searching you.
The very day I dreamt of a sweet dream The sweet-dream bade me 'good bye' And I am engrossed in dark dreaming
The very day I wrote a poetry Poetry bade me 'good bye' Till then I have no poetry.
Hi, Dalim, Perhaps it is safe to say that all, at one time or another, have felt alone amidst the crowd. Your poem is very poignant and moving and clearly indicates the opposite of Poetry bade me 'good bye'. Without knowing the poet's meaning, I find hope in Till then I am quenching my thirst with unlimited dew-mist. Hello, Dalim, thank you for sharing your poetry with us.
NeverEndingStoryChesterfield, Derbyshire, England UKJun 19, 2010
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Perhaps it is safe to say that all, at one time or another, have felt alone amidst the crowd. Your poem is very poignant and moving and clearly indicates the opposite of Poetry bade me 'good bye'. Without knowing the poet's meaning, I find hope in Till then I am quenching my thirst with unlimited dew-mist. Hello, Dalim, thank you for sharing your poetry with us.