About..a Life

Life is beautiful and is..nothing to compare with
The heartbeatings of a new born siting
In the hands of mother
Two lifes just start heating..eachother

I've been in the school a few years
But another one i get it from my older friends
I grow up in the classic way..with no time for tears
Just hide deep inside any fears.
Now i passed an age
Maybe'i don't know' what i know
But i'm just looking for an average
Of Life,you can've a lot of knowledge
And the money doesn't count them
I make them more or less..but they don't make my name..
There is an edge.

Money is the reason for wars,unsuall needs,hate or greedness
In this world..create such a madness or bussines
Still i need them to pay my bill
To afford a holiday..to be here,or to reach another hill
To've a living..just decent..and not high..just a will
I want to pass throw life
Simple,without luggage..at ending
Just in one bed..for one blessing i prayed
One car,one house...one wife..just one
The life resume..this is how it begun.

If it is dissapointment a bit or lot
I write theese words from a passion which i've got
From your kindness..i couldn't find it behind the block
Your way was long and i respect that too
But i want to feel free..not with a lock
I want to love my days
To sleep well without any worrys in the nights
I want to fly at home..here..
In other lands
Knowing....to tails behinds
No eyes from a depth of a sky..no lies
Just Me....and my modest
Minds.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2010
About this poem:
lifes are choosed by names,needs,commitments,proffesions...this one just want to be here with you.

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Comments (9)

Ladybee42
the english isn't perfect - the poem is lovely in the way it expresses your feelings at the time of writing. thank you for sharing this. applause applause applause
superman30
your onesty Ladybee42,has always been appreciate .Thank you. I missed some classes :)...and now i'm recovering"
agoodguy2have
superman30: As LB says, it expresses your feeling quite well i believe, and thank you kindly for it. ;-)
superman30
Your powerful kind
In our lifes
Is difficult ..to find.
Thank you Agoodguy.
Redex
Well superman this certainly sits well here, when money creates greed then the problems begin I think. Thought provoking your verse thankyouhandshake
superman30
if there is a limit or not depends on us what we choose,thank you Redexangel
jazzy75
Nice composition of thoughts...I thank you for sharing your poem with us.angel
superman30
Thank you Jazzy for your positive energy.
Earlgreytea
I liked this one Superman, thanks...
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