Silent whispers upon my tongue Never uttered by the young For when they whisper, they whiper true, Of times gone by and summer dew, The gentle summer breeze is spent, Dwindling Dandelion seed head, Upon the mind it grows much colder, Seeing as we are growing older, That times like these are to enjoy, Natures wisdom to deploy, For we are not so infinite, Yet our souls go on into the night, We pray that we'll not be forgot, And thank God for all we've got!
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Posted: Jun 2010
About this poem:
I'm writting this quite tired but it is me looking back on nature and how wise she is, that we have hope and cna live on through her, through others'memories of us and how beautiful and precious each and everyone here is.
SST: if this is what comes out when you're real tired, can hardly wait for a well rested SSL, this is a nice write, with good comparisons...spell check needed ;-) yes it expresses many fine sentiments.
Lol, it was like 2am in the morning and could hardly see the screen. Sorry for poor spellings.
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKJul 1, 2010
Love it, particularly 'dwindling dandelion seed head, because it always dwindles, or dissipates. ER did you mean 'whiper true' or whisper? It's fine it you meant wiper, it just needs a bit more digestion.
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ER did you mean 'whiper true' or whisper? It's fine it you meant wiper, it just needs a bit more digestion.