Time

Silent whispers upon my tongue
Never uttered by the young
For when they whisper, they whiper true,
Of times gone by and summer dew,
The gentle summer breeze is spent,
Dwindling Dandelion seed head,
Upon the mind it grows much colder,
Seeing as we are growing older,
That times like these are to enjoy,
Natures wisdom to deploy,
For we are not so infinite,
Yet our souls go on into the night,
We pray that we'll not be forgot,
And thank God for all we've got!
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Posted: Jun 2010
About this poem:
I'm writting this quite tired but it is me looking back on nature and how wise she is, that we have hope and cna live on through her, through others'memories of us and how beautiful and precious each and everyone here is.

Enjoy.

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SASSY2010
very good

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StrongSilentType
Thanks Sassy!grin
agoodguy2have
SST: if this is what comes out when you're real tired, can hardly wait for a well rested SSL, this is a nice write, with good comparisons...spell check needed ;-) yes it expresses many fine sentiments.
Ladybee42
it's a really lovely poem SS and as good guy says, if this is what you come out with when you're tired...wave wine
StrongSilentType
Lol, it was like 2am in the morning and could hardly see the screen. Sorry for poor spellings.
caroljoyce
Love it, particularly 'dwindling dandelion seed head, because it always dwindles, or dissipates.
ER did you mean 'whiper true' or whisper? It's fine it you meant wiper, it just needs a bit more digestion.
StrongSilentType
Sorry, whisper true. I'm gogin to spell check and proof read my poems from now on. You all deserve better.
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