silent night

kriik, kriik, kriik...
sound of the nitgh
no breath sound, no heart beep
its empty like my heart feel.

i read all the messages, i get all the flowers
but still i feel empty.
dont know why, dont know how i feel this.
its too silent.

one who cheer me up, when friends calling to chat
but its just a while, then empty again.
its no used to listen to a song...i feel more deep emptyness.
i ask my self why.

then come up my little cheer up girl, who called me mom
its broken my emptyness, feels like light are around me
then she went to sleep, empty again.

tonight, again, i ask my self, is my chat, my site worth
after a lots of scam i get, when i actually look for someone real?

Give me a hope, that my night is not going to be always silent and unworthed. that there is a real love still around from a real person who also look for real love.
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Posted: Jul 2010
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i just feel, empty.

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Redex
I like your sad poem, welcome to poets corner you will certainly enjoy the different poetry and styles and you never know what you are searching for too.teddybear
hedistuff
terrific...
gnj4u
Hi, stareyes,
When then come up my little cheer up girl, who called me mom, you are truly blessed. Welcome to CS Poets' Corner where all are welcome to give and receive poetic offerings. Thank you for sharing yours!
agoodguy2have
stareyes: we all welcome, i think we must fill ourselves to be able to give some to another. i like your honesty and willingness to "put yourself out there", welcome. ;-)
agoodguy2have
see "On Lonliness" Author: freeatlast64847
caroljoyce
You are not alone,for we are all interconnected,it is an illusion girl.cswelcome
stareyes
Dear All

Thank for your comments. Its really light my night, really i am. as ever after work, went home, and open my PC, i check all emails. Now i knew, there still lots of people are real, in our emptyness hope?. may be.

Again, thank for all and all your comments. I love and now i knew, i can write little sad here.

Cheers
Dee
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