the darkening light

a path I walk in a darkening light...
suffering through this blinded sight...
I push myself to greater heights...
only to feel the darkest chill...
as my body losses its will...
but I shall walk forward still...
on this path of darkening light...
for I see its end in my sight...
push I say into this night...
push I say in this cold chilled light...
to lay is to die...
to wait is to give up the fight...
so push I say push into this darkening light...
for my paths end is in my sight...
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Posted: Aug 2010
About this poem:
my writings r emotions they come and go in this poem I wrote about a void that seemed to never end even as I seemed to get closer the end seemed to be just out of reach.

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Comments (2)

fjamesj9701
Its a walk of hope in the dark, if darkness is all one percieves than how great is its light. I feel ths one very much, a push for my light.
caroljoyce
You did it really well, great rhyme.
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