My Willow Tree

I remember when i was five,

my favourite place to be,
was not school or the playground,
it was my special willow tree.

I could climb it and sit on it,
it would even give me shade,
sitting under it on a hot day,
with my little bucket and spade.

When i was twelve I'll never forget,
climbing up to the top of the tree,
I fell, i slipped and hit my head,
I broke my arm in three.

My parents roared
"thats enough, were sick of that damn tree"
"its coming down tomorrow"
"no more climbing for you, you see!"

I got out of hospital the very next day,
and came home to see,
a little knee high tree stump,
where my willow used to be.

I cried for weeks and weeks,
now where will i be?
i have no where else to sit,
i miss my willow tree.
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Posted: Aug 2010

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andrew149
I liked this one, thankyou, welcome to the corner, kindest regards,
Andrew......
PS. Maybe it's time to plant another......
sophiasummer
I cried for weeks and weeks,
now where will i be?
i have no where else to sit,
i miss my willow tree.


DM
Oh! I just loved your poem!
Simply beautiful, Welcome..
Yes, time to plant another

SS
paloma66
This is really a beautiful poem,being your first entry,if I'm right,like it so much,such wonderful but sad memories of your Willow tree.Welcome to "Poet's Corner"....thumbs up applause handshake
Divinitymagic
Wow, thankyou all so much for reading! To be honest, im not really a poet, but as im sure your aware the mood just takes you some times :-)

Maybe someone can help me, as you can see my poems always rhyme in that particular way, what is this called? I would love to know.

Johnny x
swade777
Well Johnny (Also MY name!) :-)..... you've certainly got the talent for writing poems regardless if you claim to be one or not!! So.... what is that you do with a mic around your face?
Divinitymagic
Ah that was for a tv show here in the UK with a british comedian called Jimmy Carr, that still was taking from the show. :-)
Ladybee42
did they not know you could just go and find another tree to climb? dunno
nice write divinity

thumbs up teddybear
Divinitymagic
haha well yes, this is true, but to be honest after my fall i didnt climb anymore, I had broken my arm in 3 places and actually suffered mild amnesia for a while, what made all this worse was it was all during the summer holiday from school, i didnt enjoy my summer much.. lol x
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