(The Rain)

Herein this water hit the asphalt warm. and refreshing at the same time smelling good just like you got out of the shower. steam all over you making it last and so touching. it once is the fog is hot and cold smooth is the breeze. lacking or hits my head up look up in the sky and sprinkle. a little of water spots on me is touching tipping feels slimy and. wate is some gum troops popping and appearing at sight is the sounds. of poring rain drenched in millions or soaked in the water. I am the liquid rain all over me surrounding me in a. circle is like the world rotating in a spinning ball hearing it over and over. coming back for more revenge splashes hits everything. on contact lies our clouds turning dark in seconds. or minutes is nasty and gloomy is our atmosphere in the earth. is the storm of the most dangerous clouds of the rain……………
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Posted: Aug 2010

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caroljoyce
This is very good indeed. It would have read easier if you break it up; new line where the stops are.
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