You Used To Make Me Feel Beautiful
Author: Unknown
You used to make me feel beautiful,
You used to say I am wonderful,
And now when you have me next to you,
You say I look like a used broom.
You smile to everyone but me,
You praise the look of every girl but mine,
Because I'm already next to you
You let me down...
You do not treat me like a lady at all,
You do not let me feel I'm special,
You said "we are just friends", and wall,
That heavy wall apparted us at once.
I never be "just" somebody to anyone,
I know how unique I am,
I know every word or look of mine
Brings difference and makes a day.
You used to make me feel beautiful
You used to say I'm wonderful,
And now when you have me next to you
You let me down...
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Posted: Sep 2009
About this poem:
This is my first poem in English. It's actually lyric for a song.
I wrote it today.
Comments (27)
I heard the music in my head and words just layed down themselves.
If you like it, I will write more. This was a first try.
Rob
wm
Why do not you upload your poems? I bet you have some!
And I must say, I am impressed by your poetry. I just read one poem of yours and its stunning.
From a Great Poet to a Great Poet
Maybe he needs glasses, or maybe he was not worthy of you, although you must have fallen for his praises when they were there.
My mirror says me that you are right, he needed glasses
Thank You my dear friend!
Thank you for reading my writings!
Stop hitting your head against the wall, I need it sane.
Excellent
Thank You!
I am glad you liked it!