diamondwillows
diamondwillows
May 2012
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The Flow of Things

If dark eyes could shed some light
They have
And this light has allowed my eyes to see
While we are both tossed about
On the swells of violent seas
There is a familiar voice
Assuring me

To brush the smoke away with bare hands
His fire in eyes my eyes do see
To smell the damp and briny air
My nose does find sweet and comforting
While looking up, I find you still
Still, you stand, a statue, next to me

I am a walker of the beach
I see the sea above me
While clouds mimic depths
His depths in me
I wade deep, deep under
Under wide spread currents
He submerges me
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JulesLove
JulesLove●Jakarta, Indonesia
May 19, 2012●6 Blogs●310 Comments
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beautiful, thanks for sharing Diamond bouquet
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market39
market39●adelaide, South Australia Australia
May 19, 2012●124 Blogs●1,693 Comments
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diamondwillows there,s nothing like a coffee ...toast...and diamondwillows thoughts to start my day....and i will say ..wish i had the talent to put thoughts down on paper as you do.my sister..also writes poems ....and she has books and books on poems that she has written over the years great stuffhandshake thumbs up
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PrimaveraPrague
PrimaveraPrague●Prague, Czech Republic
May 19, 2012●505 Comments
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to all : A BIG HI FROM BECCA !!! lips
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diamondwillows
diamondwillowsOP●nomansland, Minnesota USA
May 20, 2012●114 Blogs●435 Comments
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Thank you Jules, Market and Prima!
I am happy you enjoy!
Prima, Please say Hi to Bhug

This poem is for someone flying under the radar. Only today did I really see him.
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Lazly
Lazly●Bucharest, Muntenia Romania
May 20, 2012●1,645 Comments
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Beautiful Diamond! bouquet
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Lazly
Lazly●Bucharest, Muntenia Romania
May 20, 2012●1,645 Comments
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Hi Becca!
teddybear
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diamondwillows
diamondwillowsOP●nomansland, Minnesota USA
May 20, 2012●114 Blogs●435 Comments
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Guadal,

The bruch up my nose tickles.............

Lazly,
Always nice to see you. You are the sane one here.
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guadal
guadal●Heidelberg, Baden-Wuerttemberg Germany
May 20, 2012●252 Blogs●1,805 Comments
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the brush in tears
makes colors so dear
dare
paint the primas
of mona lisa
bare
and more
hair
makes a saint
insane.love
wow
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