A Confession

Confessions may be good for the soul
Not my ego
But it is time I let my ego go
And as if my kite's string has snapped
My heart has taken flight

If I have hurt you
It is only because I thought
The weight of my words
Carried no weight at all
And being weightless I ceased
Waiting for you

My truth is a fact
As true as any daydream
As rich as lonely fantasies
As real as any feeling can be
Who I may never have, does want me
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Comments (11)

Lovely and deep.
yea Calli, I have my moments lol
all kidding aside, still stuck on Paul
i hate getting "stuck" on someone......uh oh
It's not so bad
vulnerable....help
Very nice! but you need have a final for the poem..or part two is on his way? confused

anyway i like it! thumbs up
Maybe he does not understand (and I'm only assuming here..dunno so No dis-respect to him!)
your style of prose, drama, philosophy, ballad, free verse, legy, idyll, limerick literature. After all, you do write some epic stuff!thumbs up handshake wine
diamondwillows....may i have sum more pleasebowing thumbs up
I look forward to your to poems daily, this is really good...
Good morning!

thought i would switch it up and have some tea.

some poems may seem unfinished, perhaps because the story being told is not finished.
diamondwillows wave morning!
this is one of your most genuinely, honest, deep from the heart poems, love it heart beating
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