Beautiful heart (7)

Jun 8, 2009 5:32 AM CST Beautiful heart
kes65
kes65kes65essex, Essex, England UK11 Threads 80 Posts
Perhaps this might help?
One day a young man was standing in the middle of the town
proclaiming that he had the most beautiful heart in the whole valley.
A large crowd gathered and they all admired his heart for it was perfect.
There was not a mark or a flaw in it.
Yes, they all agreed it truly was the most beautiful heart they had ever seen.
The young man was very proud and boasted more loudly about his beautiful heart.
Suddenly, an old man appeared at the front of the crowd and said,
"Why your heart is not nearly as beautiful as mine."
The crowd and the young man looked at the old man's heart.
It was beating strongly ... but it was full of scars ...
it had places where pieces had been removed and other pieces put in ...
but they didn't fit quite right and there were several jagged edges.
In fact ... in some places there were deep gouges where whole pieces were missing.
The people stared ... how can he say his heart is more beautiful ... they thought?
The young man looked at the old man's heart ... and saw its state and laughed.
"You must be joking," he said. "Compare your heart with mine ...
mine is perfect and yours is a mess of scars and tears."
"Yes" ... said the old man ... "yours is perfect looking but ...
I would never trade with you.
You see ... every scar represents a person to whom I have given my love ...
I tear out a piece of my heart and give it to them ...
and often they give me a piece of their heart
which fits into the empty place in my heart ...
but because the pieces aren't exact ...
I have some rough edges ... which I cherish ...
because they remind me of the love we shared.
Sometimes I have given pieces of my heart away ...
and the other person hasn't returned a piece of his heart to me.
These are the empty gouges ... giving love is taking a chance.
Although these gouges are painful ...
they stay open ... reminding me of the love I have for these people too ...
and I hope someday they may return and fill the space I have waiting.
So now do you see what true beauty is?"
The young man stood silently with tears running down his cheeks.
He walked up to the old man ... reached into his perfect young and beautiful heart ...
and ripped a piece out.
He offered it to the old man with trembling hands.
The old man took his offering ... placed it in his heart ...
and then took a piece from his old scarred heart ...
and placed it in the wound in the young man's heart.
It fit ... but not perfectly ... as there were some jagged edges.
The young man looked at his heart ...
not perfect anymore but more beautiful than ever ...
since love from the old man's heart flowed into his.
They embraced and walked away side by side.

My heart has a few scars but is still open honest and warm.
How is yours?
Jun 8, 2009 7:48 AM CST Beautiful heart
Zellarrone1
Zellarrone1Zellarrone1Hull, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UK33 Threads 4 Polls 7,644 Posts
My purple heart is a bit rough around the edges broken heart but still manages to beat a merry tune heart beating on a daily basis heart1
Jun 8, 2009 7:52 AM CST Beautiful heart
SummerUK
SummerUKSummerUKWashington UK, Tyne and Wear, England UK24 Threads 8,842 Posts
Mine is broken and battered with a huge piece missing out of it.

Its not that way because of any Man either

I don't think it wil ever be mended blues
Jun 8, 2009 7:53 AM CST Beautiful heart
kes65
kes65kes65essex, Essex, England UK11 Threads 80 Posts
glad you took the time to read it..I know it's abit long, but worth the read
Jun 8, 2009 8:46 AM CST Beautiful heart
autumnstarlight
autumnstarlightautumnstarlightunknown, Antrim Ireland9 Threads 1,472 Posts
That is beautiful - thanks for sharing it smile
Jun 26, 2009 10:33 PM CST Beautiful heart
prairiewoman
prairiewomanprairiewomanBrandon, Manitoba Canada11 Threads 1,397 Posts
Hope you don't mind, but I did borrow this to post on the International threads...

Quality reading has been somewhat 'lacking' of late.

cheers
Jun 27, 2009 5:46 AM CST Beautiful heart
Lindosbay
LindosbayLindosbayStoke-on-Trent, Staffordshire, England UK3 Threads 66 Posts
This makes me very proud of my battered, bruised and scarred heart now. Thank you for that. x
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