He was standing there, snow falling down on him, remembering her smile, her eyes as she looked at him As their eyes met, he could feel her beautiful soul in that brief moment Frozen in time it was, snow stopped falling in time, She passed slowly by him Giving him a smile, that came from her heart, melting his hardened soul in an instant. Not knowing, that she started melting his heart, as it was scared so many times in so many different ways that he was wondering, will he be able to open it again to anyone.
Now he was there, by the fountain, standing, freezing, wondering, will she pas by once again. He could not believe it, that something like that could happen to him. He forsake the thought of ever giving his heart to anyone anymore. But then she looked at him, and smiled to him. Little did he know that she felt the same as he did. Two souls that have met just for the briefest moments in time, but this moment felt like an eternity.
She was standing there, at the window in her room, looking at the falling snow, wondering, what has happened to her. She could not get him out of her mind. She could not forget his dark brown eyes, which looked directly in to her soul. She never felt this way before, wondering, what exactly she was feeling.
Sleep did not come easy to either of them, she was passing each day by the fountain, in hope that she’ll see him again, not knowing, that they were missing each other by the minutes as he came from work there to wait for her and she was going home from her classes at the university.
Each passing day seemed longer and each passing day they both knew, that in the briefest moments, when time stood still for both of them, they found, what they were looking for. A month has passed, as they were missing each other, each day Christmas was at the doors, it was a fool moon, he was walking the empty streets. Thinking of her, feeling her, certain that she was feeling her soul near him. Touching him, as he was deep in his thoughts, he saw a bus coming towards him, he looked at it with no interest and there she was sitting in the bus, not seeing him. He just started running after the bus, a biker came towards him, he just freed him of his bike, jumped on it and drove after the bus, not caring about the cold, and the snow that started to fall again.
He saw her, as she was walking away from the bus station, towards her building, he jumped of the bike, running, he did not know her name He did not know anything about her. The only thing he knew was that they were meant for each other. He saw her entering the lift. Stopped to see on which floor she’ll get out. He ran up the stairs, he was lucky He saw in to which apartment she entered. His heart was racing as he knocked at her doors, she opened and stood there stunned, as she saw who was standing there. Their eyes met, there was no need for words as they feel in to each others embrace..
( I wrote it one night, could not sleep - - - I blame the fool moon )
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54xmax: He was standing there, snow falling down on him, remembering her smile, her eyes as she looked at him As their eyes met, he could feel her beautiful soul in that brief moment Frozen in time it was, snow stopped falling in time, She passed slowly by him Giving him a smile, that came from her heart, melting his hardened soul in an instant. Not knowing, that she started melting his heart, as it was scared so many times in so many different ways that he was wondering, will he be able to open it again to anyone.
Now he was there, by the fountain, standing, freezing, wondering, will she pas by once again. He could not believe it, that something like that could happen to him. He forsake the thought of ever giving his heart to anyone anymore. But then she looked at him, and smiled to him. Little did he know that she felt the same as he did. Two souls that have met just for the briefest moments in time, but this moment felt like an eternity.
She was standing there, at the window in her room, looking at the falling snow, wondering, what has happened to her. She could not get him out of her mind. She could not forget his dark brown eyes, which looked directly in to her soul. She never felt this way before, wondering, what exactly she was feeling.
Sleep did not come easy to either of them, she was passing each day by the fountain, in hope that she’ll see him again, not knowing, that they were missing each other by the minutes as he came from work there to wait for her and she was going home from her classes at the university.
Each passing day seemed longer and each passing day they both knew, that in the briefest moments, when time stood still for both of them, they found, what they were looking for. A month has passed, as they were missing each other, each day Christmas was at the doors, it was a fool moon, he was walking the empty streets. Thinking of her, feeling her, certain that she was feeling her soul near him. Touching him, as he was deep in his thoughts, he saw a bus coming towards him, he looked at it with no interest and there she was sitting in the bus, not seeing him. He just started running after the bus, a biker came towards him, he just freed him of his bike, jumped on it and drove after the bus, not caring about the cold, and the snow that started to fall again.
He saw her, as she was walking away from the bus station, towards her building, he jumped of the bike, running, he did not know her name He did not know anything about her. The only thing he knew was that they were meant for each other. He saw her entering the lift. Stopped to see on which floor she’ll get out. He ran up the stairs, he was lucky He saw in to which apartment she entered. His heart was racing as he knocked at her doors, she opened and stood there stunned, as she saw who was standing there. Their eyes met, there was no need for words as they feel in to each others embrace..
( I wrote it one night, could not sleep - - - I blame the fool moon )
jbibiza: Lovely, well written...but don't you think it's thus sort of thing that gives people such an unrealistic expectation of love and romance?
Yeah it does, I belive, one can dream, but still one has to be able to discern between reality and dreams . . . If one can not, these kind of stories, poems, movies, makes no difference . . . it comes down to a person, and maturity, life's lessons
Just like you women.....look at a man's post and butt.......he wrote a good story...but did you notice...nope! Just looking at his post....you nasty women.
RillyNiceGuy: Just like you women.....look at a man's post and butt.......he wrote a good story...but did you notice...nope! Just looking at his post....you nasty women.
Oh behave Rilly! No wonder your cat is so ornery! LOL
You know, Ive read several of your posts now...I dont know what you do for a living, but have you considered writing...your words are very evocative and you seem to have a natural gift.
No.... No I don't. Not at my age. Maybe, to two young (18 - 25) people with zero ties, nothing to lose, and nothing but romance on their minds.... The reason they make books and movies about this stuff is precisely because it DOESN'T happen. Fantasy.
LadyPhoenix1965: No.... No I don't. Not at my age. Maybe, to two young (18 - 25) people with zero ties, nothing to lose, and nothing but romance on their minds.... The reason they make books and movies about this stuff is precisely because it DOESN'T happen. Fantasy.
Nice thought though...
Well it is just a story, but I do agree with you, but where the world would be, with out fairy-tales, as long as one keeps his feet firmly on the ground
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Now he was there, by the fountain, standing, freezing, wondering, will she pas by once again. He could not believe it, that something like that could happen to him. He forsake the thought of ever giving his heart to anyone anymore. But then she looked at him, and smiled to him. Little did he know that she felt the same as he did. Two souls that have met just for the briefest moments in time, but this moment felt like an eternity.
She was standing there, at the window in her room, looking at the falling snow, wondering, what has happened to her. She could not get him out of her mind. She could not forget his dark brown eyes, which looked directly in to her soul. She never felt this way before, wondering, what exactly she was feeling.
Sleep did not come easy to either of them, she was passing each day by the fountain, in hope that she’ll see him again, not knowing, that they were missing each other by the minutes as he came from work there to wait for her and she was going home from her classes at the university.
Each passing day seemed longer and each passing day they both knew, that in the briefest moments, when time stood still for both of them, they found, what they were looking for.
A month has passed, as they were missing each other, each day Christmas was at the doors, it was a fool moon, he was walking the empty streets. Thinking of her, feeling her, certain that she was feeling her soul near him. Touching him, as he was deep in his thoughts, he saw a bus coming towards him, he looked at it with no interest and there she was sitting in the bus, not seeing him. He just started running after the bus, a biker came towards him, he just freed him of his bike, jumped on it and drove after the bus, not caring about the cold, and the snow that started to fall again.
He saw her, as she was walking away from the bus station, towards her building, he jumped of the bike, running, he did not know her name He did not know anything about her. The only thing he knew was that they were meant for each other. He saw her entering the lift. Stopped to see on which floor she’ll get out. He ran up the stairs, he was lucky He saw in to which apartment she entered.
His heart was racing as he knocked at her doors, she opened and stood there stunned, as she saw who was standing there. Their eyes met, there was no need for words as they feel in to each others embrace..
( I wrote it one night, could not sleep - - - I blame the fool moon )