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lisaofflorida64Tampa bay, Florida USA3 Threads 1 Polls 37 PostsOk so I have written another poem of sorts but I have but one last line to finish the poem. have been soul searching for a while now but the last line excapes me.It's a letter to mother. She is home with the lord. She has been for a long time. I really need to finish it. Thanks for reading this. Any input will be welcomed. I need to say what i neglected to say to here when she was here. Have a good weekend everyone.
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lisaofflorida64: Ok so I have written another poem of sorts but I have but one last line to finish the poem. have been soul searching for a while now but the last line excapes me.It's a letter to mother. She is home with the lord. She has been for a long time. I really need to finish it. Thanks for reading this. Any input will be welcomed. I need to say what i neglected to say to here when she was here. Have a good weekend everyone.
Hi Lisa why not post the poem as is and ask the other poets to contribute a last line in their comment section. I bet you would get some great choices. Best of luck and so sorry you did not get to say what you wanted to her. I am sure she knew what was in your heart as a mother always does. My mum passed on to soon for me and if I had of had a life time I am sure there would still be some stuff I felt I did not get to say 
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lisaofflorida64: Ok so I have written another poem of sorts but I have but one last line to finish the poem. have been soul searching for a while now but the last line excapes me.It's a letter to mother. She is home with the lord. She has been for a long time. I really need to finish it. Thanks for reading this. Any input will be welcomed. I need to say what i neglected to say to here when she was here. Have a good weekend everyone.
You set for us an impossible task without seeing what you have so far. I am sure I could come up with a line and possibly even suggest some other changes but I need something to chew on besides air.------ This thread is Archived ------
I need to say what i neglected to say to here when she was here.
Perhaps youve found it
Perhaps youve found it
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Don't stress I am sure your mum already knows all those unspoken words .....
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I turn to strangers for the words that are etched upon my heart.
(leaves you with lots of rhyming words as well) ....
And also you know what you what you want to say - it doesn't matter if it rhymes - just as long as it brings you peace.
(leaves you with lots of rhyming words as well) ....
And also you know what you what you want to say - it doesn't matter if it rhymes - just as long as it brings you peace.
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Thanks to all
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Trust me, your dear mother won't be getting that letter
You just need a great man in your life to feel much better
The dead hears, feels, and knows nothing (Ecclesiastes 9:5)
Why not address that letter to me or other members of the living?
Potarick
You just need a great man in your life to feel much better
The dead hears, feels, and knows nothing (Ecclesiastes 9:5)
Why not address that letter to me or other members of the living?
Potarick
lisaofflorida64: Ok so I have written another poem of sorts but I have but one last line to finish the poem. have been soul searching for a while now but the last line excapes me.It's a letter to mother. She is home with the lord. She has been for a long time. I really need to finish it. Thanks for reading this. Any input will be welcomed. I need to say what i neglected to say to here when she was here. Have a good weekend everyone.
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lisaofflorida64: Ok so I have written another poem of sorts but I have but one last line to finish the poem. have been soul searching for a while now but the last line excapes me.It's a letter to mother. She is home with the lord. She has been for a long time. I really need to finish it. Thanks for reading this. Any input will be welcomed. I need to say what i neglected to say to here when she was here. Have a good weekend everyone.
I would not ever, in my herat of hearts, provide a line as is such,...
the line exists in your heart,....and maybe, just maybe,...the poem was never meant to be finished. May her memory burn forever strong in your heart!
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potarick: Trust me, your dear mother won't be getting that letter
You just need a great man in your life to feel much better
The dead hears, feels, and knows nothing (Ecclesiastes 9:5)
Why not address that letter to me or other members of the living?
Potarick
You do not understand i am sure.You just need a great man in your life to feel much better
The dead hears, feels, and knows nothing (Ecclesiastes 9:5)
Why not address that letter to me or other members of the living?
Potarick
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lisaofflorida64: You do not understand i am sure.
I feel compelled to apologize for someone to say such a remark to you. Your Poem is very important. And it is heard by your dear Mother, she is a part of you and you know in your Heart that you must put those last words in place. If you feel comfortable maybe you will post it in the poetry section or even the Blogs,,or here is you wish, I think that many would be more then happy to lend a hand. Please pay no attention to those that may bring more sorrrow.
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Thank you nico for your kind words for sure. The negitive comment/s have no power over me. I may write sad words but it's the thing that makes me strong. Every thing I write comes stright out of this life I must live.
Because of nice people like you and so many on this site I get to smile when I am not exspecting it. so Bring on the na-sayers!
Because of nice people like you and so many on this site I get to smile when I am not exspecting it. so Bring on the na-sayers!
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Sory thats niko. 
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