I went to a party Mom ( Archived) (33)

Feb 10, 2007 5:46 AM CST I went to a party Mom
Katers1970
Katers1970Katers1970lonelyville, Indiana USA90 Threads 2,444 Posts
Went to a party Mom ...

(read all the way to the bottom and sign your name)

I went to a party,
And remembered what you said.
You told me not to drink, Mom ,
So I had a Pepsi instead.

I felt proud of myself,
The way you said I would ,
That I didn't drink and drive,
Though some friends said I should.

I made a healthy choice,
And your advice to me was right.
The party finally ended,
And the kids drove out of sight.

I got into my car,
Sure to get home in one piece.
I never knew what was coming, Mom ,
Something I expected least.

Now I'm lying on the pavement,
And I hear the policeman say,
The kid that caused this wreck was drunk,
Mom , his voice seems far away.

My own blood's all around me,
As I try hard not to cry.
I can hear the paramedic say,
This girl is going to die.

I'm sure the guy had no idea,
While he was flying high.
Because he chose to drink and drive,
Now I would have to die.

So why do people do it, Mom
Knowing that it ruins lives?
And now the pain is cutting me,
Like a hundred stabbing knives.

Tell sister not to be afraid, Mom
Tell daddy to be brave.
And when I go to heaven,
Put " Mom my's Girl" on my grave.

Someone should have taught him,
That it's wrong to drink and drive.
Maybe if his parents had,
I'd still be well & alive.

My breath is getting shorter,
Mom I'm getting really scared
These are my final moments,
And I'm so unprepared.

I wish that you could hold me Mom ,
As I lie here and die.
I wish that I could say, "I love you, Mom !"
So I love you and good-bye.
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Feb 10, 2007 6:03 AM CST I went to a party Mom
Katers1970
Katers1970Katers1970lonelyville, Indiana USA90 Threads 2,444 Posts
I know we aren't suppose to bump but I thought this was worth keeping up for a bit.
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Feb 10, 2007 6:49 AM CST I went to a party Mom
crying hug
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Feb 10, 2007 7:38 AM CST I went to a party Mom
shyone57
shyone57shyone57Kilkenny, Ireland14 Threads 2,037 Posts
crying crying so touching, thanks Katershug hug
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Feb 10, 2007 8:12 AM CST I went to a party Mom
RedHeadedTaurus
RedHeadedTaurusRedHeadedTaurusHere, Michigan USA17 Threads 1 Polls 8,455 Posts
This hits very close to home for me....it's happened in my family.
Thanks for posting this.thumbs up crying blues
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Feb 10, 2007 8:12 AM CST I went to a party Mom
Katers1970
Katers1970Katers1970lonelyville, Indiana USA90 Threads 2,444 Posts
Your're quite welcome
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Feb 10, 2007 8:33 AM CST I went to a party Mom
adj4u
adj4uadj4unorth central, USA4,943 Posts
i agree
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Feb 10, 2007 8:42 AM CST I went to a party Mom
Katers1970
Katers1970Katers1970lonelyville, Indiana USA90 Threads 2,444 Posts
thank you
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Feb 10, 2007 8:44 AM CST I went to a party Mom
traveldread
traveldreadtraveldreadmurcia, Murcia Spain310 Posts
i know each state is diferent in the us...but my experience of staying at a small town in texas is that the only way you could go out for a drnk is drive..... there were no walkways so that you could walk home or even to one bar to another..there were no public transport...also the chances of getting pulled by the police for being drunk was higher if your walking than driving........pretty sad.......i guess i should be greatfull for living in a country where society encourages people to use thier legs ...drunk or not cheers
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Feb 10, 2007 9:17 AM CST I went to a party Mom
SusieRR
SusieRRSusieRRnortheast, Ohio USA78 Threads 3 Polls 2,122 Posts
what is bump?
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Feb 10, 2007 9:18 AM CST I went to a party Mom
traveldread
traveldreadtraveldreadmurcia, Murcia Spain310 Posts
bump is making a pointless post so it remains on top....
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Feb 10, 2007 9:24 AM CST I went to a party Mom
native_grl38
native_grl38native_grl38Belleville, Canada10 Threads 4,332 Posts
This is one of the most touching poems I have ever read....crying crying crying
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Feb 10, 2007 11:22 AM CST I went to a party Mom
Katers1970
Katers1970Katers1970lonelyville, Indiana USA90 Threads 2,444 Posts
I know, it made me cry too. Scary thing is my oldest boy turned 13 today..he only has 3 years till he gets his driver's license. I'm going to be scared to death he'll be the innocent victim.crying
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Feb 10, 2007 12:19 PM CST I went to a party Mom
oceans5555
oceans5555oceans5555Chevy Chase, USA4 Threads 803 Posts
I felt that way, too, when my son started driving. Not only that, but I had given him my RX-7 to drive. But he handled himself well.

I think the odds of another bad driver hitting him are pretty slim, though it does happen, so it is likely that your kid will be just fine if he takes care of his own end of things. Defensive driving is just that: never put yourself in a road situation where you are depending on someone else to help you out of a vulnerable position. conversing

Three years to go, eh?

Oceans
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Feb 10, 2007 12:22 PM CST I went to a party Mom
bl8ant
bl8antbl8antAmsterdam, North Holland Netherlands3 Threads 1,000 Posts
why arn't we supposed to bump?


it was very intense Katers...made me cryblues
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Feb 10, 2007 12:23 PM CST I went to a party Mom
nwnstar
nwnstarnwnstarConway, USA38 Threads 5,464 Posts
yeah, that's why you have a designated driver.
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Feb 10, 2007 12:59 PM CST I went to a party Mom
native_grl38
native_grl38native_grl38Belleville, Canada10 Threads 4,332 Posts
I know mine are 15 now...Getting their license is right around the corner...SCARY!!!!!


uh oh uh oh uh oh
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Feb 10, 2007 1:09 PM CST I went to a party Mom
hddog
hddoghddogWarren, Michigan USA4 Threads 610 Posts
great poem.....

my daughter just got hers...I'm buying her a military style hummer only cuz they won't let tanks on the roads here cool
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Feb 10, 2007 1:10 PM CST I went to a party Mom
native_grl38
native_grl38native_grl38Belleville, Canada10 Threads 4,332 Posts
Hey good idea...I'll have to buy a set of matching ones...I have twins ya know!!!!!laugh thumbs up grin
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Feb 10, 2007 1:12 PM CST I went to a party Mom
hddog
hddoghddogWarren, Michigan USA4 Threads 610 Posts
oh boy..good lucklaugh cool
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