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Aug 17, 2007 12:37 PM CST Broken Symmetry
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
The headless horseman,
Half-moon, staring,
Pumpkin eyes viewing,
Half-orc, daring.

Matter moving, defying reason,
Time a game, playing, teasing.
Meson, boson, hackles rising,
Context a process of resizing.

What is broken, what is fixed?
Reality a set of fancy parlor tricks.
Is a soul a weight of atoms,
A dream beneath dream under lie?
What does symmetry really mean,
If life is a movie on a silver screen?

Broken symmetry,
On the bus or off,
No halfway measures
In these hidden treasures,
The golden indie script
From the pages of eternity
They are ripped.
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Aug 17, 2007 12:42 PM CST Broken Symmetry
trish123
trish123trish123Macclesfield, Cheshire, England UK177 Threads 4 Polls 13,724 Posts
oh I love the reference to 'reality a set of fancy parlour tricks' wave
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Aug 17, 2007 2:01 PM CST Broken Symmetry
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Like the rhythms there a lot.

and the images this evoked.

Matter moving, defying reason,
Time a game, playing, teasing.
Meson, boson, hackles rising,
Context a process of resizing.

Thank you.

thumbs up
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Aug 17, 2007 4:44 PM CST Broken Symmetry
constanza
constanzaconstanzaLA, California USA28 Threads 1 Polls 5,159 Posts
thumbs up cool
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Aug 17, 2007 4:46 PM CST Broken Symmetry
classicrockgirl
classicrockgirlclassicrockgirlInverness, Florida USA12 Threads 2,414 Posts
Extremely descriptive. Could see it in my mind as I read it. I really enjoyed this one.
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Aug 17, 2007 5:07 PM CST Broken Symmetry
class
classclassLiverpool, Merseyside, England UK143 Threads 809 Posts
great analogies in every line and insights
galore but definitely in the "real" world
applause
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Aug 17, 2007 5:19 PM CST Broken Symmetry
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
Thanks all...these will probably be my last poems posted here...so I hope you enjoyed them...thumbs up
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