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Sep 11, 2007 7:12 AM CST Shockwaves
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
I write in fractured rhythm
reflecting
shattered shards
of lives undone
all strewn across the sky
a smoky nimbus
drawn deep into unwary lungs
I write with jumbled reason
echoing
the hollow thump
and thud
as faltering hearts
stutter beneath the weight
of stone
of life resuming
I write because I cannot speak
or see or hear
am disconnected
from the blood drenched
moments that spun reality
off centre
now and forever
living in after
the fall.


9/12/01 NYC
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Sep 11, 2007 7:46 AM CST Shockwaves
stefonline
stefonlinestefonlineDublin, Ireland136 Threads 9,702 Posts
Nice.....wave
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Sep 11, 2007 7:53 AM CST Shockwaves
Icekrystal24
Icekrystal24Icekrystal24Glasgow, USA74 Threads 1,690 Posts
very emotional piece....thank you for sharing........
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Sep 11, 2007 7:54 AM CST Shockwaves
rwantin
rwantinrwantinRoyal Oak, Michigan USA17 Threads 8,924 Posts
Thank you. Most appropriate on this day...tip hat
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Sep 11, 2007 8:04 AM CST Shockwaves
"shattered shards
of lives undone
all strewn across the sky
a smoky nimbus
drawn deep into unwary lungs"

I have family who live in Queens NY. They were downwind from the WTC and they were forced to breathe that "smoky nimbus" for days after the towers fell. Who knows what evil lurks in the lungs of a million New Yorkers? Who knows the true body count of victims traceable to that event?
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Sep 11, 2007 8:12 AM CST Shockwaves
The_Kansan
The_KansanThe_KansanKnoxville, Tennessee USA303 Threads 1 Polls 3,395 Posts
rose
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Sep 11, 2007 8:21 AM CST Shockwaves
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Good morning all,

I wrote the two pieces I have posted this morning in September 2001, one on the 11th and this one on the 12th. Each year my heart, like those of so many others, echoes with the memories, confusion and pain of that day.

We all felt different things that day and we all felt the same things too, I saw a true unity of human spirit on the streets of New York, forged in the fires of destruction, for weeks after the Fall.

That is the best of what we are. It is what we can be always if we choose.



Peace and love, to all

DEW.
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