Don't dream, it's burning... ( Archived) (12)

Nov 21, 2007 6:25 AM CST Don't dream, it's burning...
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Daydreams start their exercise,
mind wanders through
the future and the past
just touching down at times
to see the view of old love,
wrinkled in the corner,
cast off thoughts
that could have been
all ripe and bursting,
grapes of passion
turned to wrath
and vinegar
no sweet silk honey
sliding down the throat
just the stinging scent
of charcoal, gentle mist ...
of smoke?
Oh gods, I've burned
the toast again!


Good morningwave
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Nov 21, 2007 6:30 AM CST Don't dream, it's burning...
smalltowngirl64
smalltowngirl64smalltowngirl64West of Indianapolis, Indiana USA2 Threads 154 Posts
Wow! Through your words, I can taste the bitterness of lost love. Wonderful writing.
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Nov 21, 2007 6:39 AM CST Don't dream, it's burning...
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Thanks. Now can you smell the amazing reek of bread briquet?
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Nov 21, 2007 7:00 AM CST Don't dream, it's burning...
Konigsberg
KonigsbergKonigsbergJurassic Park (Site B), Nova Scotia Canada57 Threads 3 Polls 8,448 Posts
That's funny cause i burned my toast this morning too laugh
What I was dreaming of?


Like it, Lady grin wine
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Nov 21, 2007 7:06 AM CST Don't dream, it's burning...
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Whenever I sit down to write I need to remember to make sure there is nothing cooking on high heat or it will burn. I seem to have a food motif creeping in to my work at the moment.

Probably not enough romance around, and the weather is rather bland today.

Wishing you a good day my friend.hug wine
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Nov 21, 2007 7:39 AM CST Don't dream, it's burning...
Konigsberg
KonigsbergKonigsbergJurassic Park (Site B), Nova Scotia Canada57 Threads 3 Polls 8,448 Posts
i have this problem too ... so many burned kitchen appliances and frying pans lol
But the best thoughts and lines comes to mind when I stir while i cook. Then i'm gone to write them down and stop thinking about abandoned pots on a stove.

Sun will come out again as usualy grin

Try to see it from the perspective of being an inevitable .... it is still beautiful

Good day your way too hug
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Nov 21, 2007 7:44 AM CST Don't dream, it's burning...
rwantin
rwantinrwantinRoyal Oak, Michigan USA17 Threads 8,924 Posts
Thank you, and good morning. tip hat

It could always be worse - can't imagine burning and wasting Pop Tarts...
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Nov 21, 2007 8:52 AM CST Don't dream, it's burning...
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Are pop tarts food?confused rolling on the floor laughing

Hi Robert, hope you are doing well.hug
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Nov 21, 2007 8:56 AM CST Don't dream, it's burning...
Konigsberg
KonigsbergKonigsbergJurassic Park (Site B), Nova Scotia Canada57 Threads 3 Polls 8,448 Posts
according to men they are rolling on the floor laughing help
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Nov 21, 2007 10:21 AM CST Don't dream, it's burning...
rwantin
rwantinrwantinRoyal Oak, Michigan USA17 Threads 8,924 Posts
I thought it was well known that they are the basic building blocks of life. Or just dried out flavored blocks...uh oh
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Nov 21, 2007 10:27 AM CST Don't dream, it's burning...
Konigsberg
KonigsbergKonigsbergJurassic Park (Site B), Nova Scotia Canada57 Threads 3 Polls 8,448 Posts
comfort you will not survive long on a food of cosmonauts .... Get something real to burn laugh
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Nov 21, 2007 4:26 PM CST Don't dream, it's burning...
class
classclassLiverpool, Merseyside, England UK143 Threads 809 Posts
rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing
thanks for the gentle juxtaposition...
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