My Angel ( Archived) (13)

Dec 4, 2007 11:01 AM CST My Angel
mrdntplae
mrdntplaemrdntplaeEgan, Texas USA4 Threads 7 Posts
angel My Angel
In the presence of an angel
All i see is her eyes
The more i gaze at them
The more my feelings arise
To be within her wings
Is like a sheild from tha cold
And relief on those dark days
When i have nothing to hold
To touch her is a present
That can never be bought
To hold her, the reward
Of a battle long fought
I have seen my angel
And to her I feel attached
Please bless me with your presence
Cause ones beuty cant be matched. angel
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Dec 4, 2007 11:02 AM CST My Angel
mbcasey
mbcaseymbcaseyNorth Myrtle Beach, South Carolina USA68 Threads 7 Polls 16,449 Posts
very nice
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Dec 4, 2007 11:14 AM CST My Angel
bubbles69
bubbles69bubbles69Inverness, Highland, Scotland UK17 Threads 1 Polls 1,984 Posts
I agree, now pass me the bucket. rolling on the floor laughing
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Dec 4, 2007 5:09 PM CST My Angel
venusgirl
venusgirlvenusgirlmelbourne, Australia1 Threads 61 Posts
Nice poem dearie..........my compliments to the poet.
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Dec 4, 2007 5:11 PM CST My Angel
Fallenangel74
Fallenangel74Fallenangel74southern, British Columbia Canada5 Threads 879 Posts
Beautifully Done.
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Dec 4, 2007 5:59 PM CST My Angel
themechanic
themechanicthemechanicNo, Wisconsin USA16 Threads 1,774 Posts
I have a name for her

She swoops in out of the night not a care for her plight,Treading lightly as not to be seen or heard ,Black wings open wide shouting shadowspeak with a high screachy hiss! Take filght fly away into the sunset of diluted dreams and static bliss madame Crow...
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Dec 4, 2007 6:02 PM CST My Angel
sweetykat
sweetykatsweetykatLakeland, Florida USA30 Threads 1,635 Posts
beautiful poem thank you for sharinghandshake
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Dec 4, 2007 6:03 PM CST My Angel
StarliteFantazy
StarliteFantazyStarliteFantazyFantazyLand, Missouri USA33 Threads 2 Polls 3,243 Posts
applause applause well donehandshake
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Dec 4, 2007 6:04 PM CST My Angel
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
why would you laugh like that to someone that shows their heart..??? not funny bubbles..scold
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Dec 4, 2007 6:06 PM CST My Angel
peacemom764
peacemom764peacemom764Dover, Delaware USA2 Threads 847 Posts
Very beautiful...thumbs up
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Dec 4, 2007 6:22 PM CST My Angel
bubbles69
bubbles69bubbles69Inverness, Highland, Scotland UK17 Threads 1 Polls 1,984 Posts
Didnt think it was funny, just a bit slushy. Im allowed an opinion. Had it been on the poetry forum I wouldn't have read it.
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Dec 4, 2007 6:23 PM CST My Angel
drivenbysound
drivenbysounddrivenbysoundSoutheast, Missouri USA12 Threads 3,228 Posts
Excellent!
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Dec 4, 2007 6:23 PM CST My Angel
plughead
plugheadplugheadballina, Mayo Ireland7 Threads 302 Posts
thumbs up thumbs up thumbs up Nice one mate!
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