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Feb 23, 2008 8:32 PM CST Unspoken Language
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Words drip
soft and sensual,
tones of velvet
brown like coffee,
scent of spices
on the breath
that drifts across
my cheek
and it could be
a shopping list
for all I know,
the soothing lilt
could speak to me
of laundry, taxes.
or of love
a mystery I ponder
with half-closed eyes
while I imagine romance
for a moment, passion
breathing at my ear
in structured rhythms
I don't understand
and lonely hearts
make magic
like a band aid
built of hope
because it is eternal
a language
can be learned
if need be
so I turn to meet
the gleam of smiling eyes.
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Feb 23, 2008 8:34 PM CST Unspoken Language
HJFinAZ
HJFinAZHJFinAZSun CIty, Arizona USA870 Threads 1 Polls 17,068 Posts
The gleam of smiling eyes tells me there is life and there is love...wink



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Feb 23, 2008 8:42 PM CST Unspoken Language
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
HJFinAZ: The gleam of smiling eyes tells me there is life and there is love...


Life+hope=possibility of love

Always.yay
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Feb 23, 2008 8:44 PM CST Unspoken Language
HJFinAZ
HJFinAZHJFinAZSun CIty, Arizona USA870 Threads 1 Polls 17,068 Posts
bajanblue: Life+hope=possibility of love

Always.


"Willingness" to risk, could = love...........

SO many choose to live in the past and are UN willing to risk...wink




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Feb 23, 2008 8:54 PM CST Unspoken Language
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
HJFinAZ: "Willingness" to risk, could = love...........

SO many choose to live in the past and are UN willing to risk...


I have found that the longer I live the less the past matters.


Childhood horrors cannot be repeated as I am no longer a child; I know I can survive - happily and well - on my own if need be; and I take very few things seriously because experience has taught me that nothing is as important as it feels when it is happening.

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Feb 24, 2008 7:52 AM CST Unspoken Language
Jackson
JacksonJacksonPowell, Tennessee USA31 Threads 680 Posts
bajanblue: Life+hope=possibility of love

Always.

Dorrie,

I still wish I had even a wee bit of your talent with words and the economic use of them. Then, to be able to stir such emotion with them is TRUE TALENT!!

Have a beautiful day!

J teddybear
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Feb 24, 2008 8:11 AM CST Unspoken Language
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Jackson: Dorrie,

I still wish I had even a wee bit of your talent with words and the economic use of them. Then, to be able to stir such emotion with them is TRUE TALENT !!

Have a beautiful day!

J


Hi Jackson! Always good to see you. I had an English teacher once who was forever trying to get me to use more words and expand my concepts. I was suspended for three days when I told her (and I was ten at the time) that it was more important to use one right word than a paragraph of wrong ones.

I really was not meaning to be rude when I said that, I was just 'splainin'!

wave
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Feb 24, 2008 11:45 AM CST Unspoken Language
Zellarrone1
Zellarrone1Zellarrone1Hull, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UK33 Threads 4 Polls 7,644 Posts
bajanblue: I have found that the longer I live the less the past matters. Childhood horrors cannot be repeated as I am no longer a child; I know I can survive - happily and well - on my own if need be; and I take very few things seriously because experience has taught me that nothing is as important as it feels when it is happening.


I think along these lines too bouquet

Good poem by the way wine
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Feb 25, 2008 11:14 AM CST Unspoken Language
Jackson
JacksonJacksonPowell, Tennessee USA31 Threads 680 Posts
bajanblue: Hi Jackson! Always good to see you. I had an English teacher once who was forever trying to get me to use more words and expand my concepts. I was suspended for three days when I told her (and I was ten at the time) that it was more important to use one right word than a paragraph of wrong ones.

I really was not meaning to be rude when I said that, I was just 'splainin'!

Good for you: sticking to your guns with your English teacher!!! (Isn't there a commonly used phrase that goes something like "those who can DO, and those who can't teach?")

You are more forgiving than I, because I'd have looked that b**ch up and said tongue (Or maybe worse!!!)

I was once involved in marketing short stories for a client of mine. His work was largely for the outdoor press, and I found out that editors do not necessarily have a clue, either. One story was returned from an editor who said "chamomile" was not an herb that readers would recognize and so the author needed to change the references to a more readily recognized herb!!!! I got a huge laugh out of that "editorial comment," and was only barely able to refrain from writing back to ask the editor if his magazine audience was limited to special ed. or some such! laugh That same story was indeed published by a more prominant magazine with a much larger circulation.

Holding fast to your 'splanin' certainly benefitted those of us here who are your fans, expecially me & Don (and we're both published authors, and therefore SHOULD have a clue!)

Keep that marvelous keyboard of yours going, lady! cheering

J teddybear
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Feb 25, 2008 12:52 PM CST Unspoken Language
gangel
gangelgangelPlovdiv, Bulgaria, Hampshire, England UK52 Threads 16 Polls 5,028 Posts
Nice wine
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