Dancing Amongst Tears ( Archived) (5)

Sep 7, 2008 5:07 PM CST Dancing Amongst Tears
LostPoet69
LostPoet69LostPoet69La Porte, Indiana USA3 Threads 4 Posts
Tears flow as fluent as the northern breeze
With the hint of change in the falling tears
Is like the beat of a drum
In the harvest festival of the harvest moon
The rhythem of the drum is like the heart beat
Of a warrior in the middle of a battle
Faster the beat , more intense the battle
Slower the beat , closer to the end of the battle or the warriors life
The festival of the harvest moon
Is a time to sing & dance amongst the harvest
With the moon illuminating the surroundings
Feels invigorating & comforting to know
She is over head & looking down below
Showing us we are not alone .

By : M.S.B.
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Sep 7, 2008 5:42 PM CST Dancing Amongst Tears
hollandgirl
hollandgirlhollandgirlSomewhere in Canada. B.C., British Columbia Canada523 Threads 4,464 Posts
Beautiful, thank you for sharing.

teddybear
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Sep 7, 2008 6:22 PM CST Dancing Amongst Tears
mastic55
mastic55mastic55Long Island, New York USA167 Threads 6,859 Posts
thumbs up nice.
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Sep 7, 2008 7:26 PM CST Dancing Amongst Tears
Very nice and moving. Thank-you

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Sep 12, 2008 12:08 AM CST Dancing Amongst Tears
LostPoet69
LostPoet69LostPoet69La Porte, Indiana USA3 Threads 4 Posts
Thank you for your feed back on my poetry and if you would like me to share more , let me know . To all a good night and may all your dreams come true . Until then !?!?!?
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