Candles burn with infinite passion, as cherries drop chocolate drips. Rose petals spread romantically fashioned, as I taste your strawberry lips. A hint of magic makes love everlasting, as far as your body’s concerned. Collar bone kisses slow my reaction, as we watch those candles burn. Seems we’re becoming the latest attachment, So I question our destiny. “Is this really love?” is what I keep asking, half of you is the rest of me. Caught up in traffic, my heart keeps crashing, my soul keep swerving the lane. Bodily clashing while kissing and laughing, grasping for love in the rain. All that I’m asking in this moment of passion, as we lay and blow out the flames. Can I climb your spine while suspended in time, make love and cherish the change.
Nicely written! Well thought out content and poetic presentation! I hope you wrote this for the woman you love as she certainly would love you for this one! Great job!! One of the better poems I've read on C.S. !!! Keep it up - you have talent!
HalfKoreanPooler, Georgia USAAug 13, 2009
AWWWWW!!! I love this! I mean I'm a HUGE poetry fanatic but this would make a poetry hater turn over a new leaf! lol
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