SHOOTING STAR

I LUNGED TO GRASP YOU, MY SHOOTING STAR,
AS YOU RACED BRIGHTLY, STREAKING ACROSS THE DARK HEAVENS,
BUT YOUR LIGHT BLINDED ME, AND I MISSED,
AN ETERNAL CHANCE PERHAPS,

AND I AWAIT NOW,
LEGS STRADDLING EARTH, AND MOON,
HANDS OUTSTRETCHED, IN DESPERATION, ASIDE MARS, AND PLUTO,
AND I WATCH, AND WAIT, FOR YOUR RETURN, MY SHOOTING STAR.

I GLANCE BACKWARDS LONGINGLY OVER MY SHOULDER, AT YOUR DUST TRAIL,
REACH TO CARESS IT GENTLY, IMAGINING THE DUST AS YOUR FINE HAIR.
THE ROCKS, CRASHING AGAINST MY HAND,
TUMBLING TOWARDS EARTH.

THEY ARE YOUR WORDS, FALLING TO EARTH,
TO ENLIGHTEN US, WITH YOUR WISDOM,
TUMBLING STONES OF THE MIND, ROCK OF AGES,
THE HEAVENS SPEAK TO US, IF WE WOULD BUT LISTEN.

I PRAY THE UNIVERSE IS NOT INFINITE, BUT SOMEHOW HUGE, AND ROUND,
AND YOU WILL PASS THIS WAY AGAIN, SOMEDAY, MY SHOOTING STAR,
I FEEL NO WEARINESS IN MY TASK, HOPE ALONE IS MY SHROUD,
AS I SCAN THE HEAVENS RELENTLESSLY, DESPERATELY.

THE TELESCOPES OF EARTH, WONDER AT THESE TWO BRIGHT STARS,
BUT THEY ARE THE TEARS OF LOST TIME, GLISTENING, IN MY EYES,
I CANNOT MISS YOU AGAIN, MY SHOOTING STAR,
I WILL NOT MISS YOU NEXT TIME GASHLY, I PROMISE YOU THAT.
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Posted: Sep 2010
About this poem:
In tribute to GASHLEY, she of the tumbling mind, whose poems carry both a wisdom, and enchantment, she the enigma, of the heart and soul, treasure her, magic dust is scarce, we are blessed, that she has sprinkled some for us. ben999

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jeddah12
applause i miss yah man,this is wonderful and soultryhug good one and hope to see yah back in full pics you my dear friendhug
gotitall
thank you jeddah, for your words of kindness, i will throw up the picture soon.
Gashly
these words ben...what can i say but thank you? speechless is not something i handle well, even in silence. my hands are always reaching into the darkness...you are a gentle soul with a heart larger than you know. i bow to you. lips teddybear
Scholar_Gypsy
Glad to see you back.
gotitall
thank you Gashly, sometimes, special people never see the special in themselves, a lot of us see it in you.bouquet
gotitall
thank you Scholar Gypsy, im glad to be back, having walked the road of thorns.
hugh1
touchable!!! wine
Ladyjj
Welcome back Ben :-)
A touching poem from the heart for the lovely Gashly, wine
and well deseverd to bouquet

Ljj
Ladybee42
wow! what a wonderful write, you have stopped me in my tracks with this one sir - so glad you returned to share it with us here...
thumbs up thumbs up bouquet bouquet bouquet
caroljoyce
Indeed a fascinating write and fitting tribute. Glad to meet you, sir,
CJ
gotitall
thank you hugh, glad you liked it.
gotitall
thank you ladyjj, much appreciated, truly. ben
Gashly
as seen by the falling comments here, i am but a star among many. it's not even my birthday. confused laugh again, ben, i am honored. deeply. it feels good to touch others souls, reminds me of why i breathe. teddybear
iluvisis1
Very nice. You are quite the comet yourself! xo from iluvisis1 xo
gotitall
thank you ladybee, glad you liked it, it was necessary for someone to do it, she is special all right.
gotitall
thank you caroljoyce, the tribute i hope, fits the bill, so to speak.
gotitall
im glad you liked it Gashly, you are gifted indeed, by any standard, in fact, you probably set the standard, in most peoples eyes.lips
Redex
Loved your poem, and yes gashly is a very special lady, she is just realising this.
But you???? BEN999???? why the subterfuge?????handshake
gotitall
thank you iluvisis, there are dark stars in the sky too, but not everyone can see them, glad you liked it.
gotitall
thank you redex, the red fox, im glad you liked it, yes i think Gashly, is only starting to realize her true talents, as for the subterfuge, well that's a mystery, for a reason, more mysterious, than the reason itself.
gotitall
thanks everyone, for taking the time to comment, much appreciated, ben999,bouquet
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