Enter and exit the paradise

All alone, I close my eyes
From a distance
I enter a paradise

Swimming in a bed of colorful flowers
The sun immaculately shines
Your soul awakens me with waves of invigorating showers
Our touch and thoughts aligns

Running along our destined way
Becoming a cliché
We breathe for a dance
Freeze in a timeless trance
Succumbing to the breeze of romance

The sun comfortably sets
The jeweled moon reflects your healing eyes
Piercing a stubborn threshold
A magical story unfolds

All alone, I open my eyes
From a distance
I exit the paradise


~ Stressfree 2010
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Posted: Oct 2010
About this poem:
The power of imagination of our day and night dreams.

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Comments (7)

jeddah12
laugh good for it was a paradise dream,what i had was a scary dream,,,good piece of paradise from you,love itwine beer
StressFree
Yeah jeddah12, I read your poem. Sounded like it was one of your fears maybe?
beautifulyou
Very nice Stressfree ~


and this
"Your soul awakens me..."
and this
"The jeweled moon reflects your healing eyes..."
are priceless!






thumbs up bouquet
Ladybee42
very cool write stressfree thumbs up
bouquet
sophiasummer
Succumbing to the breeze of romance

Imagination tis a wonderful thing to enjoy, what beautiful words SF..

your pen doth flow, in the quiet evenings of silence...

SS
xx
freeatlast64847
No wonder you're Stressfree, with an imagination like that to escape to. Kudos!beer
opentuit
From a distance with closed eyes, paradise... feels so real...
And it's so easy to succumb to that breeze
With open eyes, the distance becomes real again


bouquet I love it!
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